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Random Ghost Ft Mobrat - Fallen Angel

Postby randomghost » Feb 10th, '07, 09:43

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Postby Restlesswon » Feb 10th, '07, 12:54

your beat?,i gota hear this,downloadin

not bad man,verses were on point,chorus was abit off change,in the flow and all,i would have prefered a more laid back hook tho IMO,plus good to hear a new mobrat verse,nice work fam, i aint a big fan of the beat,but it works,GL on future productions b, Stay Up
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Postby Phantom » Feb 10th, '07, 20:31

beats koo

u sound like eminem tho man lol
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 10th, '07, 21:40

hook is terribly bad, sorry but really, i cringed,

best part bout it is mobats part but again talking fast into a mic with no emotion aint flow man :sweating: you lyrics are good and on point although maybe you could try not asmany one ryhmed and go for more multis, just tryna help here :sweating:


randghost your first verse was your better, dunno bout your points geting made aint arguin with them though just saying,

beat was ok, simple but koo


overall not a bad track, i think the worst thng is you cant play with the beat, coz the beat itself cant be played with, if that makes sense :sweating:
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Postby B.A.D. » Feb 10th, '07, 22:13

the beat is nice but needs a lot of more layouts... more sound

the verses r nice, the lyrics are very good, I really got deep into listenin to them...

but what the fuck's up with the hook... mayn.. never do that shit again I'm serious

nice track, nice beat
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Postby randomghost » Feb 11th, '07, 10:12

thanx for the feed guys
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