hook is terribly bad, sorry but really, i cringed,
best part bout it is mobats part but again talking fast into a mic with no emotion aint flow man

you lyrics are good and on point although maybe you could try not asmany one ryhmed and go for more multis, just tryna help here
randghost your first verse was your better, dunno bout your points geting made aint arguin with them though just saying,
beat was ok, simple but koo
overall not a bad track, i think the worst thng is you cant play with the beat, coz the beat itself cant be played with, if that makes sense
