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Random Ghost- Drug Abuse ( produced by Big AXD)

Postby randomghost » Feb 5th, '07, 13:23

produced by BIG AXD, here is 2 links:

1. http://www.sendspace.com/file/bohacx (4.39MB)


2. http://www.zshare.net/download/random-g ... n-wma.html (WMA VERSION, SMAL SIZE)


enjoy :8)
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Postby AspirinE » Feb 5th, '07, 14:32

ur flow is weak. u need work on it.

Im high as fuck as right now and i still dont feel it that much.


Im feeeling some rhymes, but u needa spice it up a bit, needs more multies andwordplay.

Right now it feels like i just listened to some nursery rhyme from that purple dinosaur Barnie.

Not judging it too harshly, but if u want others to listen and enjoy it u need to do better.
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Postby randomghost » Feb 5th, '07, 21:01

ASP wrote:ur flow is weak. u need work on it.

Im high as fuck as right now and i still dont feel it that much.


Im feeeling some rhymes, but u needa spice it up a bit, needs more multies andwordplay.

Right now it feels like i just listened to some nursery rhyme from that purple dinosaur Barnie.

Not judging it too harshly, but if u want others to listen and enjoy it u need to do better.
i will work with your advice, thanx
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Postby randomghost » Feb 5th, '07, 21:42

wtf i got like 4 downloads tilll now and only 1 feed :smoking: , bump
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Postby Restlesswon » Feb 6th, '07, 01:17

thank god for the wma version lol,i got time to download that b4 i leave,my break is almost up.

Your flow aint that good on this one compared to your other songs,or it wasent mixed in good :S sounds a second to quick in some parts,hook seems on point tho , nice beat,just i dont like the piano tones, would have prefered other sounds,besides all this, not bad, stay up fam.
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Postby B.A.D. » Feb 6th, '07, 01:48

u need to work it better.... but the track is still worth listening

thnx 4 using my beats haha

keep it up
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Postby randomghost » Feb 6th, '07, 07:59

thanx homies, the problem is i finished this track in 5 min without using any lyrical stuff, coz i was so fuckin busy, no problem next time i will put more effort :happy:
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Postby C-Game » Feb 6th, '07, 18:06

i like da tune in da beat...
da way u did deliver it didnt work for me...i wld hv prefer if u had given a laid back mood that blends wit da beat and do wat u did in da chorus...chorus is kool
but as i said earlier ...try to make da choruse unique..use effects ..
ill say this is an average track from u...
keep doin more stuff man :)
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Postby B.A.D. » Feb 11th, '07, 00:01

bump 4 my men randy
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Postby Kez » Feb 11th, '07, 00:30

randomghost wrote:thanx homies, the problem is i finished this track in 5 min without using any lyrical stuff, coz i was so fuckin busy, no problem next time i will put more effort :happy:


No offense man but if you gonna make songs then you can't just make it and say it's crap cause you had no time, you shouldnt make songs in a rush, you should make sure they're perfect.

Just my opinion.
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