Enimee v. Inches (CLOSED)
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Enimee v. Inches (CLOSED)
by Enimee » Feb 15th, '07, 03:23
simple 6 barz 3 vote ko drop whenever
Last edited by Enimee on Feb 19th, '07, 22:24, edited 2 times in total.
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by Enimee » Feb 15th, '07, 03:37
me versus inches, this bout to be vengeances
pay back for your lame ass sentences, wack posts and in rememberance
of you R.I.P to this dude, cause after battlin me ull be 6 feet deep
in inches? thats 72, so from now on u best be discrete
dont wnna see ur name no more anywhere, if u show up they'll be many there
that'll be plenty fair, plus a doctor for ur denty care
man ud be better battlin a parapalegic, u'd still be scared and your freakin
u'd still lose without them even speakin, or battle hellen keller cause she cant read it
me battlin u is like an impedment, ur slowwin me down
cause normally i stay speedin, and blowing dem roundz
im bout ta roast this guy, give me a fuckin oscar so i can boast alot
or call me kellogs cause we both toast alot, or Oster cause we both got toast ta pop
<BREAKDOWN>
*6 feet in inches = 72
*denty = dental
*hellen keller is blind
*Kellogs make Pop Tarts
*Oster is a name brand toaster oven
<edit> original line
or kellogs cause we both toast alot, or Oster cause we both got toast ta pop
new line
or call me kellogs cause we both toast alot, or Oster cause we both got toast ta pop
pay back for your lame ass sentences, wack posts and in rememberance
of you R.I.P to this dude, cause after battlin me ull be 6 feet deep
in inches? thats 72, so from now on u best be discrete
dont wnna see ur name no more anywhere, if u show up they'll be many there
that'll be plenty fair, plus a doctor for ur denty care
man ud be better battlin a parapalegic, u'd still be scared and your freakin
u'd still lose without them even speakin, or battle hellen keller cause she cant read it
me battlin u is like an impedment, ur slowwin me down
cause normally i stay speedin, and blowing dem roundz
im bout ta roast this guy, give me a fuckin oscar so i can boast alot
or call me kellogs cause we both toast alot, or Oster cause we both got toast ta pop
<BREAKDOWN>
*6 feet in inches = 72
*denty = dental
*hellen keller is blind
*Kellogs make Pop Tarts
*Oster is a name brand toaster oven
<edit> original line
or kellogs cause we both toast alot, or Oster cause we both got toast ta pop
new line
or call me kellogs cause we both toast alot, or Oster cause we both got toast ta pop
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by NoLimitWordz » Feb 15th, '07, 10:46
only thing i didnt like about it is he felt he needed to break his stuff down for everybody...cuz if this was a real battle you can't be breaking shit down after your verse ya know? lol
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by Inches » Feb 16th, '07, 21:18
Enimee cant you see, that you dont write with-complexity-joints
just agree, your rhymes is a scibbled mess with-directory-points
you dont understand my 'high death count' mischevious plan,
killing wanna be Stans, when they call out the battle genious-man!
i know how you play, say you chillin all day, but i know your time-frame
you masturbate, increase your killing rate in GTA, then bite your rhyme-game
stupid prick, i know your tricks, if i wasnt with bar your be suckin my dick
now you want peace, think my hate will decrease, but now its getting thick!
four lines more but ive already killed you both lyrically and mentally too,
i dont need to explain, my inflicted pain, and i can spell dentally too!
its over now, pointless, leaving you jointless, choking on your "fatal flow"
before i go ill drop one final blow let rain matrix know its time for "Fatal Lows"
you said nothing about feeding so i included the Dental stuff (you said denty)
just agree, your rhymes is a scibbled mess with-directory-points
you dont understand my 'high death count' mischevious plan,
killing wanna be Stans, when they call out the battle genious-man!
i know how you play, say you chillin all day, but i know your time-frame
you masturbate, increase your killing rate in GTA, then bite your rhyme-game
stupid prick, i know your tricks, if i wasnt with bar your be suckin my dick
now you want peace, think my hate will decrease, but now its getting thick!
four lines more but ive already killed you both lyrically and mentally too,
i dont need to explain, my inflicted pain, and i can spell dentally too!
its over now, pointless, leaving you jointless, choking on your "fatal flow"
before i go ill drop one final blow let rain matrix know its time for "Fatal Lows"
you said nothing about feeding so i included the Dental stuff (you said denty)
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by ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 16th, '07, 23:49
dam 
ok i got to do this proper so he dont moan
enimee, you were good nice rythming no great punches ok multi's not alot of personel stuff
inches - your new style kicks ass, you upped your lyrical game bit time, nice multis, and vocab is nice aswell, punches are still as strong as ever, dental flip was killer, i know it was a little bit fo a flip but it aint to bad a thing, and you killed ihm, your punches were strong your rythmed were better with better multis flow was near flawless, and you were very personel
now that ^ may look like dikriding but im feeding while also voting, coz as you can se einches switched up hist style and game i had to recognize it properly
my overall vote goes to - Inches
if i categoriesed it he had most of them as well, if anyone moans ill break down both verses bar by bar, im just too lazy to do it now
ok i got to do this proper so he dont moan
enimee, you were good nice rythming no great punches ok multi's not alot of personel stuff
inches - your new style kicks ass, you upped your lyrical game bit time, nice multis, and vocab is nice aswell, punches are still as strong as ever, dental flip was killer, i know it was a little bit fo a flip but it aint to bad a thing, and you killed ihm, your punches were strong your rythmed were better with better multis flow was near flawless, and you were very personel
now that ^ may look like dikriding but im feeding while also voting, coz as you can se einches switched up hist style and game i had to recognize it properly
my overall vote goes to - Inches
if i categoriesed it he had most of them as well, if anyone moans ill break down both verses bar by bar, im just too lazy to do it now
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