by BaZZ » Feb 23rd, '07, 00:52
FLOW -- Global (rhyme after rhyme after rhyme - i like that stuff)
STRUCTURE -- Flamez
PUNCHES -- Flamez
MULTIES -- Flamez
RHYMES -- Global
VOCAB -- Flamez
COMPLEXITY -- Flamez
NAMEPLAY -- Flamez
OTHER(enjoyment, metaphores, creativity) -- Global
OVERALL -- Flamez
@Global: try to cut ur raps into equal lines like Flamez did... this way ull get the structure right... this verse was much better than the previous one against inches... i see improvement

"Hard hearted beast with a jaw full of meat
Engulfed in a feast while you starve at his feet
He toss you the least little portion of a piece
To the floor and expect you to rejoice when you eat" - Brother Ali