LW: Calibur vs Rappin Paper (CLOSED)

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FLOW
STRUCTURE
PUNCHES
MULTIES
RHYMES
VOCAB
COMPLEXITY
NAMEPLAY
OTHER( enjoyment ,metaphores , creativity anythin u can think off)

5 votes to win
4-1 TKO
3-0 KO


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Rapping Paper

caliburs a-pussy-gun, in the streets hes tha-wussy-one without any back-bone
i mug your little-wife, take her keys and brittle-life, grab my knife and attack-your-home

i unlock your door-and-creep, upstairs where the floor-dont-creak, and get ready-to-slaughter
i cant believe my-eyes, to my-suprise, makin porno with guys, the camera girl-is-your-daughter

now he knows theres a witness, throws a fit like a princess, takes his prized-calibur
your mind is shocked, thoughts is blocked, then shops his dick his "undersized-excalibur"

so for this rapping-fool, asshole hurts so he uses crapping-tools, dick hurts-when-he-pees
the door knocks, emotions undecieded, overly excitied, the man whore Kurt-gets-on-his-knees

he dont mind your little stump, or givin your ass a bump, uses condom wrapping-later
his emotions pray, he'll never meet the day, where he once again meets rapping-paper

excalibur - king arthurs sword


Calibur

When I post a rap on paper the paragraphs class has voters clappin' later,
Turns foes ta masterbaters as they witness the illness of a poet captivator,

Ur a roll a wrappin' paper, you've no gift ur flows shit, a hopeless masquerader
Put you in a closed casket later, and count my vowel sound flows with calculators

I`m known for slappin fakin' jokers actin' greater, I hit 'em with a syllable massacre,
This fictional character can't match my rap stats, or even scatch at my lyrical calibre

I riddle 'n baffle da illest battlers with biblical chapters 'cos my religion is scrypt
I`m a language maker and this tragic faker "RappinPaper" can't imprison my gift

When I finish this shit I envision you ripped 'n shredded like presents on my birthday
If you we're a professor of wordplay, you couldn't teach me lessons on my worst day!

[BaZZ]

FLOW:Calibur
STRUCTURE:Calibur
PUNCHES:Rapping Paper
MULTIES:Rapping Paper
RHYMES:Calibur
VOCAB:Calibur
COMPLEXITY:Calibur
NAMEPLAY:Calibur
OTHER:Rapping Paper

Overall: Calibur

both were good tho

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

I riddle 'n baffle da illest battlers with biblical chapters 'cos my religion is scrypt
I`m a language maker and this tragic faker "RappinPaper" can't imprison my gift

When I finish this shit I envision you ripped 'n shredded like presents on my birthday
If you we're a professor of wordplay, you couldn't teach me lessons on my worst day

!

those were killer i really enjoyes them


ok

Paper had flow, multis and complexity

Calibur, had punches, enjoyment, rymes, structure,

i say tie for nameplay

for vocab, ill have to give it to calibur, since i had to check some words and thats very rare for me

so thats calibur = 5, Paper = 3

for other, i need to tie it, i loved papers flow nd multis, but i enjoyed the punches from calibur and those lines i quoted,

this was a vry close batte both theseguy deserve big props

but mostly on enjoyment i have to give it to calibur

My vote: Calibur

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

FLOW-calibur
STRUCTURE-calibur
PUNCHES-calibur
MULTIES-RP
RHYMES-calibur
VOCAB-calibur
COMPLEXITY-calibur
NAMEPLAY-calibur
OTHER-calibur.....

overall:calibur
both were good tho..

[C-Game]

Calibur
3-0 KO
closed