Inches vs Bar {ROUND TWO} VOTE!!

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

bars there alitconfusing though but i got it. who am i to judge , but the second ones good,lisa knows not too much .

lol its kool, but please dont vote unless you know more, like you said my verse was confusing to you, but it isnt to somone who knows text battling lol

[Enimee]

ok bar i got summin 4 u...one last battle me n u a battle to end all battles this will decide it, it u win no mopre dickhead from me, if i win...well yeah u get the picture...


i jus really wnna squash this

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

ok bar i got summin 4 u...one last battle me n u a battle to end all battles this will decide it, it u win no mopre dickhead from me, if i win...well yeah u get the picture...

i only accept if its annomynoss battle, then nothign gets in way of voting for any of us....

[JMG]

FLOW: Inches
STRUCTURE: Inches
PUNCHES: Inches
MULTIES: Inches
RHYMES: Inches
VOCAB: Bar (vexed, perplexed...)
COMPLEXITY: Inches
NAMEPLAY: Bar (bar had 2 inches had 1)
OTHER: Inches (very enjoyable)

inches gets my vote

u suck bar

[Enimee]

that werks for me hit me up in pm lemme know how we're gonna do this

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

FLOW: Inches
STRUCTURE: Inches
PUNCHES: Inches
MULTIES: Inches
RHYMES: Inches
VOCAB: Bar (vexed, perplexed...)
COMPLEXITY: Inches
NAMEPLAY: Bar (bar had 2 inches had 1)
OTHER: Inches (very enjoyable)

inches gets my vote

u suck bar

do you alwys vote against someone straight after the voe against you...coz if you check allthe votes you do its always straight afte someoe votes against you....prik

2-2

[JMG]

uh no i just enjoyed inches verse better ..no need to speculate

[NoLimitWordz]

yeah he does...which is why his shit shouldent even count....he either bitches and moans afterwards or just votes against them if they have ongoing battle

[Inches]

honestly bars was wack'ish i hate his "new style" that he obviously bit but thats another story for another time

a lot of talk fora guy who bit me
...dont act like you dont knwo
your "Frestyle" where you just happened to mention ceratain "Wifebeaters"

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

bump for votes

[Block]

The only Bars that Bar likes, are the ones up his ass, hes anally-turned-on
Ima lyrical-fire-man, rhyming-desire-man, consider yourself fatally-burned-on
Lyrical Fire Man/Rhyming Desire Man- Not a multi. This is a common misconception that
if you put --- inbetween words that kind of sound alike, it becomes a multi. That's false. only words that rhyme in there are desire/fire. Try not to have the same ending words, such as on/on man/man. It showsl ack of skill and creativity.
He only asked for 6 lines, scared my rhymes could ruin his time and destroy-his-game
His life-style, is male stripping with a slight-smile, just said it so i can employ-hes-lame
I believe you meant "Imply" not employ. Emply he's lame doesn't make sense at all.

About to finish up, like i did inside your girlfriend, throw away the rubber-in-tha-trash
Grab her hair, let her ride me like the city fair, then simpily rub-her-and-then-crash
Again, an attempt at a multi but none found. Keep elevating


I pinch a inch you twitch a Mindge i clinch the best you flinch at rest a cut the flesh,
i test the web like parker of peter darker the cheater neater the heater your a inch im a meter, I don't know what this is, but the bars don't rhyme at all. It looks like you went to rhymezone.com and just copied words that rhyme..

round two im renouwned through the text next im crowned perplexed i frown your vexed,
last time you were lucky your flows yucky your ryhmes mucky, your so chicken your kenutcky,
"you're so chicken you're kentucky"- Attempted wordplay but no punch at all

so i fry ya try ya spew you back up like fack, fuck, take the gerbil, im so verbil your already dead,
i shread ya n spread ya in the thread ya made you aint near my grade i finished, you just got played
Same as the others, the bars don't rhyme/no multies.. just.. keep elevating.

Overall I give this to inches. He had punches and structure and a few attempts at multies. Keep it up.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

The only Bars that Bar likes, are the ones up his ass, hes anally-turned-on
Ima lyrical-fire-man, rhyming-desire-man, consider yourself fatally-burned-on
Lyrical Fire Man/Rhyming Desire Man- Not a multi. This is a common misconception that
if you put --- inbetween words that kind of sound alike, it becomes a multi. That's false. only words that rhyme in there are desire/fire. Try not to have the same ending words, such as on/on man/man. It showsl ack of skill and creativity.
He only asked for 6 lines, scared my rhymes could ruin his time and destroy-his-game
His life-style, is male stripping with a slight-smile, just said it so i can employ-hes-lame
I believe you meant "Imply" not employ. Emply he's lame doesn't make sense at all.

About to finish up, like i did inside your girlfriend, throw away the rubber-in-tha-trash
Grab her hair, let her ride me like the city fair, then simpily rub-her-and-then-crash
Again, an attempt at a multi but none found. Keep elevating


I pinch a inch you twitch a Mindge i clinch the best you flinch at rest a cut the flesh,
i test the web like parker of peter darker the cheater neater the heater your a inch im a meter, I don't know what this is, but the bars don't rhyme at all. It looks like you went to rhymezone.com and just copied words that rhyme..

round two im renouwned through the text next im crowned perplexed i frown your vexed,
last time you were lucky your flows yucky your ryhmes mucky, your so chicken your kenutcky,
"you're so chicken you're kentucky"- Attempted wordplay but no punch at all

so i fry ya try ya spew you back up like fack, fuck, take the gerbil, im so verbil your already dead,
i shread ya n spread ya in the thread ya made you aint near my grade i finished, you just got played
Same as the others, the bars don't rhyme/no multies.. just.. keep elevating.

Overall I give this to inches. He had punches and structure and a few attempts at multies. Keep it up.

my bars dont rythme ..... what sort of bullshit you on....i dont go to know site for my ryhmes, n they do ryhme

I pinch a inch you twitch a Mindge i clinch the best you flinch at rest a cut the flesh,
i test the web like parker of peter darker the cheater neater the heater your a inch im a meter,
round two im renouwned through the text next im crowned perplexed i frown your vexed,
last time you were lucky your flows yucky your ryhmes mucky, your so chicken your kenutcky,
so i fry ya try ya spew you back up like fack, fuck, take the gerbil, im so verbil your already dead,
i shread ya n spread ya in the thread ya made you aint near my grade i finished, you just got played


so yes nothing there ryhmes....... k block rally even i dont take hate of a person into voting, really this site gets more and more arseholes each day, inches will even agree my stuff ryhmes, coz he's real n not got hate, your a prik k-block really fuck off or just dont vote in my shit ever again if you aint goni do it right, as for loads of words that ryhme sorry i mean i thought yhming lots of words was a good ting especiall when hey all ake sense...maybe my punches lacked because of this...thats just somehting i got to work on.....your still a prik

[Block]

Sigh, why do rookies always get offended when somebody criticizes their work?
Flesh/Meter- NOT A RHYME
Vexed/Kentucky- NOT A RHYME
Dead/Played- NOT a RHYME

I don't 'hate you', I have no reason to. This is not a 'hate vote'. I'm trying to hel pyou elevate. Let go of your fucking ego and take my advice. You tried to rhyme innternal-multies. But you rarely succeeded in making any multies at all. That type of bar/rhymescheme is too complicated for your skill ability. That's not dissing you, it's truth. I may be an asshole, but I will never het vote on somebody. I'm an asshole, but not an immature asshole. I'm giving you tips to elevate and get your game up. It's your choice to listen or not.

EDIT: And no, alot of it did not make sense at all.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

Sigh, why do rookies always get offended when somebody criticizes their work?
Flesh/Meter- NOT A RHYME
Vexed/Kentucky- NOT A RHYME
Dead/Played- NOT a RHYME

I don't 'hate you', I have no reason to. This is not a 'hate vote'. I'm trying to hel pyou elevate. Let go of your fucking ego and take my advice. You tried to rhyme innternal-multies. But you rarely succeeded in making any multies at all. That type of bar/rhymescheme is too complicated for your skill ability. That's not dissing you, it's truth. I may be an asshole, but I will never het vote on somebody. I'm an asshole, but not an immature asshole. I'm giving you tips to elevate and get your game up. It's your choice to listen or not.

ROFLMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!

ok sorry im bad, but im beyond just end of line ryhming, obv its to complicated for you to understand, but beileive me lines all flow perfectly ryhme wise...and i aint got a bad ego man, i take everything everone throws at me and work on it and make it better...you can ask anyone here and theyll back me up on that, your just being a dick when your saying it.. coz my bars ryming are fine, just coz i go beyond end of bar ryhming

[JMG]

im gonna be on bars side here even though i liked inches verse better but just cuz u dont like someones style dosent mean it sucks