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Postby 3110 » Mar 8th, '07, 17:07

HI this is my first Beat so please listen to it and give feedback

http://www.zshare.net/audio/new-mp3-1xg.html
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Postby randomghost » Mar 8th, '07, 20:05

the beat is really bad man, u need to practice more :happy: just try to do better next time :sweating:
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Postby Tomega » Mar 8th, '07, 20:23

that hurt my ears
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Postby mart85 » Mar 8th, '07, 20:38

it's actually not that bad lol... there are good elements in it... but the reason why people said it's bad is because the rhythm is weird... it's not a steady rhythm, so it's basically impossible to "feel" it... try to listen to any rap song and notice that you can count the beats, nod your head, snap your finger or whatever lol, on the snare, or with the kick... so try to work on that with your beats, it's probably the most important thing, to have a good drum pattern that follows the rhythm...
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Postby 3110 » Mar 9th, '07, 14:44

I know that the beat ain
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Postby 3110 » Mar 9th, '07, 18:55

I made another beat i think it
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Postby stevethetruth » Mar 9th, '07, 19:53

i actually like the feeling of the first beat lol and second one not so much


keep praticing though :D
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Postby 3110 » Mar 10th, '07, 17:51

I made another Beat pls tell me what you think about it
http://www.zshare.net/audio/beat-7-mp3-94e.html
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Postby MoBrat » Mar 11th, '07, 00:00

3110 wrote:I made another Beat pls tell me what you think about it
http://www.zshare.net/audio/beat-7-mp3-94e.html


:-k well it's not my style but it's not bad probably better then what i could do
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Postby DelinQuent » Mar 11th, '07, 00:38

i listened to em. they need work. you need to work on your melodies. keep doing it tho, it'll come to you with time.
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