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Postby Flamez » Mar 11th, '07, 20:20

i dled this but never gave feed back damn it was fuckin' great wish i could be like you lol :p i like pride fuckin' great let me borrow your girls lol j/p :p
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Postby C-Game » Mar 11th, '07, 20:43

still on 25 %
and thanks for da S.O on da cover ... just noticed it
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 12th, '07, 14:22

Sarah wrote:It's fuckin hot shit :worship: You did a great job with this Bar :D well done, it's awesome \:D/ lovin all the tracks. Prides gotta be my fav, very catchy :8) :worship:


thanking you :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship:

ill reward you later :shifty: :flower: :D
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Postby AspirinE » Mar 12th, '07, 14:41

Intro:
Pretty decent intro.

Pride (ft. ASP)
I told you before the track is dope, the best verses i heard from you. And that A.S.P dude is just plain sexy and he rocked the verse too.

9/10

Racists' Thought (ft. MEEEEEE)
Pretty cool, heard better flows from you so ill give it a nice
7/10


House Of Commons (Skit):
Cool skit, i understood some parts but the rest i just couldnt get what the fuck you were saying.

The Patriot:
Nice beat, nice lyrics, u sounded a bit uncertain though, you stumbled on ur words sometimes, could be better.
8/10

The Words I Should Say:
Decent shit, the beat werent all that, but u still managed to work it.

7/10

This Is Why:
My favourite song on the track. I love the beat and the hook like.. HAWT!!!.

10/10

The Last Time (ft. ThomasAguanis)
It was aight, i liked the hook most for some reason, tomases voice is great for hooks like this. But you did well on the beat.. just didnt feel the song much in general.

6/10

The System:
The beat is too slow for the flow u tried, u shoulda tried fitting more words in a bar.

6/10



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ohh and the Pride mega mix is dope too, some very dope verses on there, i cant recall who is who right now coz i dont got much time. But yeah i remember some very dope shit there.
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Postby C-Game » Mar 12th, '07, 16:51

Pride
da beat is just right up there among with the best. and bar u have lifted ur game up big time.. da content was really up there.. da rhymes da transitions da flow da vocab everythin was there..good job mate..
ASP brilliant as usual.. he cld use a better mic.. but all in all this is da best song on ur ep..



Pride Megamix

damn i cldnt be on this..lol...
this is a great collabaration and i love dis.. but one minor thing is that the second verse is off beat.. its not dat audible ..other that great props to all of da rappers on it..


Racist Thought

mart did this ryt...nice.. so he used a similar effect dat i use on da anthem..nice work mart ..all props to u as u have keyed it just fine and da panning works nice.. kez good improvement .. voice sounds more deep..
bar excellent as usual through out this album.. and after pride this song is da best...


House of common

wat da fuck is happenin .. is dat 2 deep on da background singin ...lala lalalalala
and bar ur accent is annoyin...lol j/k bro..


Patriot

i had a smile through out this song..IMO its almost a key rap..but not there .. this song is nice man ..really ..new style...gud work IL-rounce


Words i should say

ASP maintained his identity in da production .. no prominent strings . da bass , da 4x4 ..good work there..

This is why

i like da beat.. bouncy bouncy :) .. my favourite raps by bar is on this song ... and whos SK??
he is doin da chorus right... good work .. i like that..

The Last time

yea this song is a good song... nothin to complain .. had everything on it

System

well this is average.. didnt like it that much...

Media..

he he funny.. and i recognize da guitar riff and da other sounds..its from hip hop ejay 4 ...

O/A bar this has been ur best compilation
i have lisented to abt 4 - 5 songs of urs before , but this is like a whole new level.. its like da first battle u did on TR comparing to da drops ur doin now..
mart85 again as usual brilliant..pride beat is just off da hoook.. excellento and ur mixin on racist is one of da best..
nice addons by asp , il , dope , sk , ta, kez , fantom

it was worth da download ..took me around 2 hours ...
but 2deep wasnt there:(
lol.....
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 12th, '07, 19:49

thx asp :worship: and cgame :worship: :worship:


also everyone check my edit in first post please :D
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Postby C-Game » Mar 12th, '07, 19:59

damn i need to login to it ...
ill do it 2mo....
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 12th, '07, 20:07

C-Game wrote:damn i need to login to it ...
ill do it 2mo....


kool thx man :D
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Postby Phantom » Mar 13th, '07, 04:47

Pride Megamix
but one minor thing is that the second verse is off beat..


i got it onbeat its on my soundclick
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Postby mart85 » Mar 13th, '07, 05:00

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lol it IS on beat :tounge2: there is like 0.01 second of difference between the two and I did this because I thought it sounded slightly better to me atleast :p but the difference is really subtle... there is a background snare roll in the drum pattern and I used it as a reference for the flow of pretty much every verse, and to my taste it's real fine the way it is, but sorry if you don't like it as much, I should have shown you the song before I guess :sweating: but don't worry, people won't think your verse is bad
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Postby randomghost » Mar 13th, '07, 05:47

ok here is the album review....

1. intro: its a good idea, but not the best, 3/10

2. pride: one of the hottest track in the album, ASP verse is wack, the hook is tight, good job, 10/10

3. the racists thoughts: the beat is hot as fuck, the hook is tight, kez vesre is better than before, 8/10

4. house of commons (skit): good idea, but i didnt like it, 2/10

5. the patriot: i really can feel verse 1, the beat is kinda weird but fit wids the song, the flow is good too, 7/10

6. the things i should say: this beat remind me wid eminem underground shit, lol, the flow is hot, even the ending is cool, 5/10

7. this is why: the best track in the album(after pride), the beat is HOT HOT, its like dr. dre produced it, mart did really a good job, the hooki is tight, the verses i can feel it, ur voice is more powerful, 10/10

8. the last time: the beat is ok, hook is good, 8/10

9. the system: if the bass was changed, the track would be better, but the flow is ok, 6/10

10. pride megamix: best verse is phantom, and STK, tight shit too, 10/10

11. media: i liked the flow, 6/10


i never expected all that in the Ep, great job, and mart u are the DR. DRE UNDERGROUND PRODUCER, i really feel your beats, good job,

overall, 8/10
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 13th, '07, 05:53

^ thx man :worship: btw do you know you just sayed asps verse was wack :whistle:
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Postby randomghost » Mar 13th, '07, 05:57

Bar wrote:^ thx man :worship: btw do you know you just sayed asps verse was wack :whistle:
i meant wack(as tight or hot) :happy:
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Postby bg_pop » Mar 13th, '07, 13:11

C-Game wrote:
... and whos SK??



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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 13th, '07, 15:56

Made a Second Edit with amount of d/l ect :D

check it :happy:
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