i aint to great on it but maybe's Verse is awesome as usual
feed on the track, i original only did it to help my mixing
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it was perfect.
McMaybe wrote:haha i like it, your first verse is pure fire... hook could be better, but nice ass verses, some of your best lyrics in my opinion
yeh the hook, had trouble with it i put the bit like "can you flow" in then just did the other bit to fill it up lol


AspirinE wrote:umm.....
Bar's flow was wack to be honest lol, i just cant take the irony of listening to "i can flow and i can rhyme"![]()
and the mixing, u made the layovers too layout.
you can do better, i felt like being harsh this time.![]()
Mc maybe however rocked the beatit was perfect.
i didnt think id end up with maybe on the track or else i would have put a hell of alot more in it


and I thought in the second verse you missed a bit of energy compared to the first one


mart85 wrote:bar, your first verse verse was nice... but like ASP said, the layovers are a bit too loud, you'd need to boost the volume of the center vocal track and lower the layovers a bit... but it was cooland I thought in the second verse you missed a bit of energy compared to the first one
the chorus is cool, it could be mixed more on time with the beat tho (the first part that goes with the flute melody)
but overall it's a nice attempt![]()
and maybe, nice verse as usual... great flow
imma keep practicing
hence the word TRY lol
Bar wrote:AspirinE wrote:umm.....
Bar's flow was wack to be honest lol, i just cant take the irony of listening to "i can flow and i can rhyme"![]()
and the mixing, u made the layovers too layout.
you can do better, i felt like being harsh this time.![]()
Mc maybe however rocked the beatit was perfect.
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lol yeh i know ive did betteri didnt think id end up with maybe on the track or else i would have put a hell of alot more in it
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n thx for the mixing tip






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