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Bar Ft. Mc Maybe - Can You Flow (produced by Mr. Kooman)

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Postby sinemm » Mar 14th, '07, 19:33

McMaybe wrote:hmmm, if the flow was better on your first verse, it would of been perfect


agree ^^
but its not bad tho
Maybe's verse is very cool too..nice job ;)
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Postby D@vid » Mar 15th, '07, 00:02

it was good except bar u whispered a little it sounded like, and the hook wasn't all good. but ur flow was good, both of u
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Postby randomghost » Mar 15th, '07, 05:09

nice shit, maybe spits like fire, bar is cool too, :8) good work
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Postby HAYZI » Mar 15th, '07, 13:54

maybes verse was bangin the hook was mixed terribly, and bar ur verses were ok lyric-wise but uve gotta work on ur flow and delivery


oh and i thort i heard my name im not sure :unsure: props either way
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 15th, '07, 15:46

HAYZI wrote:maybes verse was bangin the hook was mixed terribly, and bar ur verses were ok lyric-wise but uve gotta work on ur flow and delivery


oh and i thort i heard my name im not sure :unsure: props either way


lol i ment it in the way if something is hayzi in your eyes you cant see it coz its all hayzi :sweating:

n thnx for the comments people :worship:
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Postby bg_pop » Mar 15th, '07, 16:14

well
You know
I think if you put more energy in your songs thay will be better
The chorus is nice
The beat is very good too
Verse 1 is good too
Verse 2 is :sweating: well i like it :)
McMaybe part is the part that I like the most

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Postby B.A.D. » Mar 15th, '07, 22:30

maybe u is a fuckin genious hahaha

didn't loved the hook

bar's verse is nice but there was some part in the middle i didn't like, anyway its a pure nice verse, god job mayn...

nice track, nice beat
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