Syanied Would like to present...

[Ethos]

A poison control exclusive.

I did this up today and just finished it. it's pretty much a song I wanted to mix for like a week so yeah.... without further a due. I give you.

Pride [Syanied Remix] -Bar feat. ASP
http://www.zshare.net/audio/01-pride-sy ... p-mp3.html

[DC4952]

its pretty good. it was on beat and everything. beat was good. cool remix.

[shady45]

A poison control exclusive.

I did this up today and just finished it. it's pretty much a song I wanted to mix for like a week so yeah.... without further a due. I give you.

Pride [Syanied Remix] -Bar feat. ASP
http://www.zshare.net/audio/01-pride-sy ... p-mp3.html

Oh shit.
This beat is better as the real beat.
This beat is hot.
I like the song now.

[DJ.Parker]

great beat matches the song perfectly

[AspirinE]

Songs cool man, some parts of the acapelas need some more volume though.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

orginal is a lot better....
its ok....good job tho synaid

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

^ mart has been making beats for a bit and is basically a pro at it, syanied is just starting to get into his trade ya know

you kept it on beat and the beat is sick, gives the track a darker feel, maybe if the volume on the acapellas was a bit higher itd be better, but you did good man nice work oh btw nice work addapting to the hook ect. everything for the song was writen to fit marts beat exactly as his beat went so for you to even adapt to it keep it on flow and still give the track a new feel is excellent work man if ya want any more pellas for practice just PM me

im guessing for the beat/flow the best person to leave feed will be mart he'll be able to tell you how nicely you went to it

[Ethos]

Thanx for the feed everyone.

and @ bar: I was trying to raise the volume of the pellas but I wasn't sure if it was right or not. I'll tinker around with it. and I think that'll be my first remix for a while. so I might not need your pellas. for now. I have to start writing for this beat before everyone thinks it was just for the remix.
Not to be rude. but you know what I mean

[mart85]

reading the title, I didn't expect that lol... it's weird to hear a remix of a song you produced

but good job on it, it's well made the acapella slightly slips as the song goes (cause I think your beat is *slightly* faster than mine) but that is really subtle... I couldn't help noticing it cause I musta heard the original over 250+ times (seriously ) but it doesn't sound out of place either

as for the beat, it's nice... I would suggest boosting the drums a lot tho, they are too quiet...the drum pattern is the most important thing in a rap beat and it must be loud enough for people to feel it and maybe try to lower the brass/orchestra hit cause this soundfont needs to be used with precaution... it's better as a background instrument in my opinion

but overall, good job

[Ethos]

reading the title, I didn't expect that lol... it's weird to hear a remix of a song you produced

but good job on it, it's well made the acapella slightly slips as the song goes (cause I think your beat is *slightly* faster than mine) but that is really subtle... I couldn't help noticing it cause I musta heard the original over 250+ times (seriously ) but it doesn't sound out of place either

as for the beat, it's nice... I would suggest boosting the drums a lot tho, they are too quiet...the drum pattern is the most important thing in a rap beat and it must be loud enough for people to feel it and maybe try to lower the brass/orchestra hit cause this soundfont needs to be used with precaution... it's better as a background instrument in my opinion

but overall, good job

yeah my beat was slightly faster. by about .031.

and i'll try working with the drums and the soundfonts a little more.

thanx for the feed