sing for the moment (NEW LINK BETTER QUAL.)

by **stevethetruth** » Mar 24th, '07, 03:01

http://www.zshare.net/audio/sing-for-th ... 3-9w0.html

all done in one take ..was to lazy to mute the singing part..it just slipped out of my mouth lol

will no doubt be re-recorded this is just some fresh material and i want to know how to make this better lol

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Mar 24th, '07, 03:16

my nets acting up n zshare aint working

ill leave feed as soon as it starts working again :sweating:

by **D@vid** » Mar 24th, '07, 03:18

^^ its just the link. it dont work

by **stevethetruth** » Mar 24th, '07, 03:19

added a sendspace link

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Mar 24th, '07, 03:21

^props

leave feed in 5 minutes

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Mar 24th, '07, 03:27

did you by any chance write verse 1 and 2 a long type a part ?

lyrics for both verses you upped you game alot, verse one has your usually flow, verse 2 has a alot better flow you upped your game on that verse probly your best verse i heard form you man :worship:

singing in chorus :whistle:

lol wasnt orrific n i cant talk lol

one of your better tracks although id advise goin over verse on to get the flow as good as verse 2 :sweating:

by **stevethetruth** » Mar 24th, '07, 03:34

Bar wrote:did you by any chance write verse 1 and 2 a long type a part ?

lyrics for both verses you upped you game alot, verse one has your usually flow, verse 2 has a alot better flow you upped your game on that verse probly your best verse i heard form you man singing in chorus lol wasnt orrific n i cant talk lol

one of your better tracks although id advise goin over verse on to get the flow as good as verse 2

sweet thanks for the feed man and yeah i wrote the second verse a few weeks after i wrote the first so that might have something to do with the better flowing lol

and thanks for the advice i will def do that :worship:

by **$0 R3@L** » Mar 24th, '07, 04:33

acoustic sound is awful,so hollow and flat.Sounds liek your recording in the bathroom or a closet.The singing on the hook was also not good lmao lyrics were ok,beat choice was ok but after hearing your old tape you seem to love the eminem beats too much.Try different types to play wit ya style.

by **stevethetruth** » Mar 24th, '07, 04:38

$0 R3@L wrote:acoustic sound is awful,so hollow and flat.Sounds liek your recording in the bathroom or a closet.The singing on the hook was also not good lmao lyrics were ok,beat choice was ok but after hearing your old tape you seem to love the eminem beats too much.Try different types to play wit ya style.

well i've found other beats trust me lol that's the only em beat i've written to in the past 6 months and this was for practice lol

(not sure, and lmao i recorded it in a big closet, good guess) i'll try recording in open space i guess

thanks for the feed man :worship:

is there anything else i could do to make this audio better when re-recording?

by **$0 R3@L** » Mar 24th, '07, 04:42

overlays.

Just on the end of some lines add a overlay.If you dont know what this is lemme know.I think that'd help your punches and rhymes alot more.Also get yourself cool edit 2 and play with sum of its presets and add some reverb and echo effects etc etc etc

by **stevethetruth** » Mar 24th, '07, 04:45

$0 R3@L wrote:overlays.

Just on the end of some lines add a overlay.If you dont know what this is lemme know.I think that'd help your punches and rhymes alot more.Also get yourself cool edit 2 and play with sum of its presets and add some reverb and echo effects etc etc etc

hmmm i'll try that out props for the help man

by **$0 R3@L** » Mar 24th, '07, 04:50

np...aye none of us are dr dres here at producing....i improved only from trying different programs and practing.Give it time and no doubt your be mastering these audios.Pce and good work :beerchug:

by **mart85** » Mar 24th, '07, 04:51

I would agree with bar... the second verse sounds much better than the first one...if you could try to improve the flow on the first verse, it would help a lot :happy:

and about your recording, yeah, like I told you before :sweating:

did you try to record in mono? this would most likely solve the problem lol

by **stevethetruth** » Mar 24th, '07, 04:55

mart85 wrote:I would agree with bar... the second verse sounds much better than the first one...if you could try to improve the flow on the first verse, it would help a lot

and about your recording, yeah, like I told you before did you try to record in mono? this would most likely solve the problem lol

it's is actually fixed lol...i think

plus i tried mono once completely fucked up the quality and echoed too much it was weird lol

but yeah thanks for the feed i will def work on that

@so real - thanks once again...and hopfully i will hah

by **mart85** » Mar 24th, '07, 05:20

lol ok, if everything works now, good :happy:

but mics are mono anyway, so when you record something, it is mean to be a mono signal... the problem your mic had, I don't know how to explain it, but it seems like it recorded in stereo and it inverted one of the channel (the left or the right)... or maybe your mic is stereo :unsure:

but I don't know if it's possible lol... I'm not that good with that kind of stuff... I know what is (or was) the problem with your recordings but I can't tell why it is (was) like that lol

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