Practicing Flow

[Rain Matrix]

bizzurke3.wma - 0.65MB

Here it is ya moment of zen, tell me if tha flows betta

[ThomasAguanis]

it's better from the last tracks you posted. You got the lyrics and pronunciation
just need to work on flow and emotion(you kinda sound like you're bored and reading but show a hint of emotion at a point or 2)
. But your flow is a whole lot better than I remember last..also maybe try to get some different beats maybe it's just my opinion but I didn't like this one much.
Keep it up man

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basically everyhting thomas said