Big Ax-D "Pain in my words lp"

[Kez]

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[Kez]

Alright

All That She Wants:
Nice beat, good fast flow, but this aint my kind of song.
Still good though, 8/10

Pain In My Words:
Nice dark beat and slow flow. This is my kind of song, serious shit. I love it. Could have better rhymes but it sounds good and that's the most important thing.
Hook's shit hot.
9/10

Lord Forgive Me:
Nice flow. Beat's hot. Reminds me of Evil Deeds for some reason.
8/10

Hotel California:
Haha The Eagles? Dosen't seem like your type of thing
But it's still pretty good.
I love the verses. I actually quite like the verses, good to hear more singing in rap nowadays.
9/10

Words Could Destroy:
First thing i have to point out; STOP APOLOGISING FOR THE MOBRAT BULLSHIT. He started it, okay? Maybe you went far yeah, but so did he! He should be apologising to you in his songs, he isn't is he?
Fuck.

Anyway, i like the hook and your verses. Random has really improved lately, i like his verse. He dosen't sound half bad. Nice verse.
9/10

Konvicts Music:
Hot. Don't really know what else to say.
9/10

Tragedy:
I like the violin beat. Your first verse is hot, the chorus is too. Might as well just say it's all hot.
9/10

Get On The Floor:
My least favourite track so far. I just hate club songs, no offense.
7/10.

Broken Down:
Techno-ish beat, pretty good. I'm confused whether or not this is supposed to be a sad song or clubbish. Hook flows good to the beat.
8/10

Riot!:
Good effect at the start.
You sound good, full of energy. I find it always fucks up a song like this if you sound too quiet. Beat is greatttt, your verses flow hot too. You are really good with overlays.
9/10

Aint That A Bitch:
Already fed on this i think, still pretty good.
9/10

Soul Affected:
Nice beat, same hotness as usual.
9/10

Halloween:
I wish i had better quality on this, it makes me sound cheap and crap.
Beat is great, did you make this? I'm sure i've asked this before. Bar's verse seems a bit loud? Or is it just me? Good flow from Bar here, lol Jaws the big fuckin shark, always makes me laugh that does. I love the hook, you done good on that. Ax lives up to his usual standard, i know my verse has shit-ass quality. Erm, do you diss MoBrat in this song? Cause you said sorry to him in Words Could Destroy, so i'm just wondering.
9/10

In My G Ride:
Pretty good, same as usual.
9/10

Survival:
Good shit from you Ax. I like the beat. I actually like the guy at the end, i think he suits the beat well.
9/10

Sailing Out:
Pretty good for a last track. Explains everything off the tape and why you do it. The beat definately works. Hook's great too.
9/10

Overall:
Very hot tape. There's not one song where your flow isn't on point, your features all work (except me who sounds crackly and loud ) and you picked great beats. Your quality is pretty good from what i heard, i only heard your mic crackle once, i like your singing style, and your overlays are kind of like your trademark to me. I can't find much wrong with it. It seemed that you could of had more topics, like it was either about a girl, haters or a club song, maybe it's just me maybe i didn't listen clear enough? Anyway

9/10, next LP should be hot if you keep up your standard.

That took me ages to type so you better appreciate it

[B.A.D.]

MADD PROPZ KEZ.....

I see peeps round eire have diferent types of fav tracks, thats kinda what this album is about.... It reads your mind and reflects it in my words, the point is that our world is fucked up now, thats like the mayn thing....

I'll make my next LP bigger n hotter

again thanx for the feed

[C-Game]

Bro im listenin to da tape...

fuckin hot dude....

give full review sooon...

[Xray]

downloading my nets dieing but soon ima leave a small review

[Xray]

finally it finished downloading

all she wants - heard it before but still good not badd

pain in my words - alrite song but didnt like it but still good

Lord forgive me - ur voice sounded different and its hard understanding wat ur saying cause of ur accent. i didnt like it

Hotel california - are you from california anyways alrite song

my words could destroy - all rite song but mixing could be better

konvicts music - shit song cause tha beat was shit and it seems like your copying akon on dat track

tragedy - i like tha concept and tha beat best song so far

get it on the floor - nicee song but tha mixing made it sound shit

broken down - shit song cause most of tha song ur singing and it dont sound good

Riot! - nice song

aint that a bitch - alrite song

soul affected - i like tha concept alrite song

halloween - bar did great and you did great too but it needs to be mixed better

in my g ride - i didnt like this track at all

survival - madd beat and nice concept

sailing out - nice song

overall - 8/10 alrite LP but if it was edited rite den it would of been a hell lot better but still alrite

[B.A.D.]

^^^^^^^

word thanx 4 the breakdown....


that helped me sum, cuz rite there I try ta do wut most people be liken...

I need a new mixer for my stuff lol

thnx again playa

[randomghost]

here is ma review:

01. all dat she wants: flow is hot, the beat is kinda old type beat, i liked it

8/10


02. pain in my words: the flow is hot and the beat, and the way u express ur story, nice shit man, but the chorus is kinda weird (who is in the background of da chorus)??

7/10


03. lord forgive me: wow i like your style here, the flow is hot, the beat is good too,the chorus is awesome

9/10


04. hotel california: flow is hot as hill, i can feel the beat, chorus reminds me of jamie fox, hot hot hot, nice job

10/10


05. my words could destroy: the beat is awesome, we did a nice collab here, still more collabs will come soon

9/10


06. konvicts music: i like the beat and the flow is cool, but the chorus here is not good coz u are yelling, to much.

6/10



07. tragedy: damn i can feel the flow here, and the style is hot, beat is cool too, chorus is in point (IS THAT A REAL STORY) lol

9/10



08. get on the floor: the beat is hot as fuck (50 cent type), flow and chorus is hot. egyptian girl lol (maybe i can hit a verse for this as a remix)

9/10


09. broken down: i didnt like the beat, but the flow u do in the middle is ok, but the when u sing at the beginning and the chorus i didnt like dat much

6/10


10. riot!: i can feel the anger, the beat is not that good, u are shouting too loud in the chorus, but the flow is good, and when u cough, lol

5/10


11. ain't that a bitch: i like the old type beat, and the concept of the song, flow and style is good

7/10


12. soul affected: the beat is hot, chorus is in point, flow is hot

8/10


13. halloween: bar flow's is good but the delievery is not good , like the flow is not in point, big axd the chorus is hot and the i like your style and flow , kez flow is hot... the song is kinda funny

7/10


14. in my G ride: the flow is hot, the beat is ok but at certain parts boring, chorus is good, at the end u talkin to fast, but i like the song

7/10


15. survival: damn your style here is hot as fuck, flow and beat is hot too, chorus is ok, but the guy in verse 3 is kinda talkin (if he show some poewr it would be better) but he is ok

8/10


16. sailing out: the beat and flow is hot, the chorus i think it sounds kinda james bond movie soundtrack, but nice ending

8/10


overall man, the album is hot, keep on doin what u doin homie, i guess that album express most of your life story, but i like the concept of the album, i will say 8/10, nice shit man, keep it up....by the way i copied all the songs in ma cell phone...lol

[C-Game]

All that she wants...

whoa i like this song...good song mate...i cant identify da other rapper..but 30-3 u did a kick ass job on it man...
wen i first thought Ace Of base...i didnt think it was da real group..nice stuff mate

Pain In My Words

First song came to ma head was No Apologiess...Lyrically i really like this song.. u did da singin perfect on da key ..good job ... the beat cld have done a lil more..but for this song it works...

Lord Forgive me

liked da chorus . ...who are doin da raps..?? good concept on this song... some parts in da second verse .. it sounded a lil off... other than that the song is koool..

Hotel California
in da chorus the "Hell" , "Hall Way" parts r a lil off pitch..is randomghost in this song..coz u mention his name in da song...anyway its an okay song mate...

Words COuld Destroy
One of ma fave songs in this song...BIGAXs best delivery ...randy good job mate ...

Konvicts music

Didnt like da chorus that much man...da rest is kooo

Tragedy
is this bars 2Deep???.....this is another one of ma fave tracks.. i liked da music in this ....da delivery by both 2deep and 30 works fine on this../


p.s i only got these tracks with me ...rest at XT's coz ma pen was full

give review of dem 2mo

[MoBrat]

u suck u didn't even send me the link like i asked u 2 dl-ing now

[B.A.D.]

:angry: u suck u didn't even send me the link like i asked u 2 dl-ing now

wtf???...

wut cha talkin bout??

[MoBrat]

Whats With Saying My Name In Ur Track...U Said It's Over Then U Put My Name In Ur Track Thats Low Man U Said My Name In A Few Tracks

Halloween:
I wish i had better quality on this, it makes me sound cheap and crap.
Beat is great, did you make this? I'm sure i've asked this before. Bar's verse seems a bit loud? Or is it just me? Good flow from Bar here, lol Jaws the big fuckin shark, always makes me laugh that does. I love the hook, you done good on that. Ax lives up to his usual standard, i know my verse has shit-ass quality. Erm, do you diss MoBrat in this song? Cause you said sorry to him in Words Could Destroy, so i'm just wondering.
9/10

[$0 R3@L]

i took note of the shot on 'konvicts music' and also on 'halloween' at both me and mobrat.

[mart85]

here's short full review

all that she wants - already gave feed

pain in my words - nice song, wasn'T feeling the chorus too much, but it wasn't bad, the verses are nice

Lord forgive me - cool song, you sounded kinda different during the verses tho lol... I liked the chorus

Hotel california - liked the beat, and the vibe of the song... and I like the original hotel california so the chorus was interesting lol

my words could destroy - it was good... I liked the chorus, and like Cgame said your delivery was nice in this... random your verse was cool too nice job

konvicts music - wasn't really feeling the track overall, sorry... a bit too different for me

tragedy - I really like this beat... solid track overall

get it on the floor - not bad, but yeah sajjad said, the mixing really doesn't help here... overall it's decent for a club banger, but it would need better quality

broken down - wasn't feeling the singing that much, it would need better quality/mixing to maybe work... the raps were cool and the beat is nice too, but I wasn't really feeling the song that much

Riot! - I liked your flow in this, overall good song

aint that a bitch - already gave feed

soul affected - nice beat... the chorus worked for me... good song

halloween - for some reasons I really like the hook lol... good job on this... bar's verse is good, but you can do better, as far as flow and delivery your verse ax was quite good, nice delivery... and kez, if it wasn't for your quality, it would be real nice, cool fast flow... this is my fave track on the LP, I just like halloween things lol...

in my g ride - wasn't feeling it that much... it's ok but I didn't really like it

survival - nice beat... the vibe of the song is cool... the layovers would need a little better mixing, but it was interesting...

sailing out - wasn't really feeling the hook, but it was original... the rest is pretty solid, good track to end the LP

overall - good job on this, I think the main flaws are quality and mixing... and singing isn't always perfect, but with good quality and mixing it would make it a lot better lol... but keep it up, you got good flow and delivery, with more practise you'll get even better

[Kez]

Thanks Mart

Yeah i hate the quality situation i have right now, but he needed the verse so i got the best i could