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Postby mart85 » Apr 7th, '07, 01:27

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Cool beat, heart beat on it?

That hook is sick, I like it.

1st verse was strong...nice so far.

eh, idk about the 2nd dude.

3rd verses is nice too.

8.5/10


pretty much what i thought ^

lookin foward to this tape.


same here... tight song... and the second verse sounded a bit weird to me at first, but it got better as it went on in my opinion... nice job both of you, I wsa feeling that track :8)
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Postby B.A.D. » Apr 7th, '07, 01:38

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MoBrat wrote:sick track man. ima dl this...i understand how kez thought u dissed ax cause of the line > kill ax n gimmicks...< but overall u both had great shit :worship:


'killin acts and gimmicks' ;) and thx :)

See, thats just what happened in my tape... people missunderstand lyrics...
that's why you can see i never dissed ya....

about the track:
the eco effects on it r sick!, the hook is killin fya loved that
n the lyrics r hott!... where did cha got this beat... nice thang rite there....
good track mayn
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Apr 7th, '07, 02:15

the beat was alright. the chorus is kinda catchy

the 1st verse
flow was good. lyrics eh i don't like them it just doesn't sound right to me. it seems you use the same word a lot in a line then switch it and rhyme a lot of a different word...like in the chorus "pack attack iraq..ect. maybe it's just me but I don't like that :sweating:


2nd verse
flow was good. I don't like his voice at all which turns me off the track. he also does the same 1 word rhyme a line so many times, it's fine -_-


3rd verse:
same as 1st verse...some of this makes no sense to me though. like
"i burn your face like toast, even piss in your ghost so don't boast on the edge looking close" and "sit back and exhale, bang your head on the wall like you're beating a nail' :sweating:


maybe it's just me but I didn't really like this much at all. no offense to either of you but it's just not my style. keep it up though :happy:
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Postby $0 R3@L » Apr 7th, '07, 02:26

:) thx for checkin bro :worship:

"i burn your face like toast, even piss in your ghost so don't boast on the edge looking close" and "sit back and exhale, bang your head on the wall like you're beating a nail'...is actually,

'i burn your face like toast evne piss on your ghost.I dont im on the edge like the coast'

but i suppose each person has there taste :sweating: anyway thx for checkin :worship:
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Postby $0 R3@L » Apr 7th, '07, 02:31

btw thx to everyone who replied :worship: :worship: :worship:
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Postby Sophie » Apr 7th, '07, 02:42

catchy song i gotta say. nice beat. good flow. yeah i like it. :flower:
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Postby BaZZ » Apr 7th, '07, 04:40

lovin this track man, great flow and lyrics :worship:
"Hard hearted beast with a jaw full of meat
Engulfed in a feast while you starve at his feet
He toss you the least little portion of a piece
To the floor and expect you to rejoice when you eat" - Brother Ali
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Postby DC4952 » Apr 7th, '07, 05:17

HOTT bro. flow was awsome and lyrics were to :worship: the other guy was alrite, pretty good. Beat was good too. ill be lookin forward to the tape man :worship:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 7th, '07, 12:38

chorus is kool, reals first verse is sick

DQ - this aint his type of flow style, he was good but i prefer his other style

third verse is sick aswell i like the flow better on this verse

everything bout the song is good only thing i dislike is every track i hear from you its the same concept just different wording, obviously once the tape drops there will be loads of different concepts just for a second single i think you shoulda dropped a different style but thats just what i think, tracks still sick
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Postby HAYZI » Apr 7th, '07, 17:59

its quite catchy but it sounds a lot like a lot of words that rhyme carelessly thrown together,

overall sounds ok but very unoriginal
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Postby $0 R3@L » Apr 8th, '07, 01:06

firstyl thx everyone for checking :worship:

concept wise i tried with this tape to cater for everyones taste as well as my own...like i could of made 17 undergound old school tracks (my fav style) but then that woulda just caterd for my likes and left many disapointed.

So if u get what i mean,i just tried to make sure everyone can find at least one style of concept they enjoy.

anyway enough of my rambling and thx again everyone :worship: :worship: :flower:
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Postby randomghost » Apr 8th, '07, 05:42

FROM WHERE DID U GET THAT BEAT??/ :angry: lol, the beat is hot man, first verse is fire, and the rest is cool, good song so real cant wait for the tape :flower: (no homo)
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Postby $0 R3@L » Apr 8th, '07, 05:48

thx dude :)
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Postby HAYZI » Apr 8th, '07, 17:13

$0 R3@L wrote:
concept wise i tried with this tape to cater for everyones taste as well as my own...like i could of made 17 undergound old school tracks (my fav style) but then that woulda just caterd for my likes and left many disapointed.

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lol ive never heard u do an underground old skool track....ever
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Postby $0 R3@L » Apr 8th, '07, 22:26

thx mc maybe :worship:

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concept wise i tried with this tape to cater for everyones taste as well as my own...like i could of made 17 undergound old school tracks (my fav style) but then that woulda just caterd for my likes and left many disapointed.

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lol ive never heard u do an underground old skool track....ever


lol i shud hope not too cus i havent released them.I have around 2 or 3 on this tape.But yer we all have our tastes and likes. ;)
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