the beat was alright. the chorus is kinda catchy
the 1st verse
flow was good. lyrics eh i don't like them it just doesn't sound right to me. it seems you use the same word a lot in a line then switch it and rhyme a lot of a different word...like in the chorus "pack attack iraq..ect. maybe it's just me but I don't like that
2nd verse
flow was good. I don't like his voice at all which turns me off the track. he also does the same 1 word rhyme a line so many times, it's fine -_-
3rd verse:
same as 1st verse...some of this makes no sense to me though. like
"i burn your face like toast, even piss in your ghost so don't boast on the edge looking close" and "sit back and exhale, bang your head on the wall like you're beating a nail'
maybe it's just me but I didn't really like this much at all. no offense to either of you but it's just not my style. keep it up though
