Tash Vs Ice (Votes Por Favor)

by **Tash8** » Apr 8th, '07, 03:30

Your rhymes are Pitiful and Weak, but mine are more top notch because their Witful and Sweet.
You better be Wishful to Not be Beat, cause my multi's will make you Rot and Become Fatigued.
My punchlines will even have you Become Intrigued and you'll decide you should Change Your Mind
cause your structure had even made you become Deranged and Blind, and you'll Find, my Rhymes
are Complex, and I've become as popular as Malcom X, How Come because you've been An-nexed
and your another one of the have-Been Rejects, cause in the rap game there are no Seat-Checks.

yo good luck ice, and thanks for accepting unlike the others who won't..

Just Wondering Ice, is that good structure cause you were saying the other was bad.

by **IceAxe** » Apr 8th, '07, 03:45

got a new scrawl fresh to rip all ya flesh, enthrall and thresh
you'll fall to death from this squall's un-rest I'll maul son's chest

Im on a five-strong spree in my-quest, with a fight song, this MC i di-gest,
puke up, revive an try-on the pick-next you cant survive on ya bitch-text

Tash 8, alas mate you inccured my wrath trait dont you remember our last debate?
I'll beat ya ass sate, this ice mass straight make this your last day, put you in casts great

thresh-beat viciously

sate-filled to satisfaction

by **IceAxe** » Apr 8th, '07, 03:47

Tash8 wrote:Just Wondering Ice, is that good structure cause you were saying the other was bad.

looks decent....but it'd be easier to read with some spaces in between the bars, but dont change it...to late for that

by **Tash8** » Apr 8th, '07, 03:48

thanks i wont.

VOTE!

by **Tash8** » Apr 8th, '07, 05:39

by **DJ.Parker** » Apr 8th, '07, 06:13

structure- Tash
Multies- Ice
Flow- Ice
rhythem-Ice
Nameplay-Ice
Other- Ice
Punches- Ice

**Tash ur sentences r too long 4 me so u lost ur flow
**U got some multies but Ice's better

by **DJ.Parker** » Apr 8th, '07, 06:14

sorry connection got stuck so edited the second post

by **Tash8** » Apr 8th, '07, 06:15

DJ.Parker wrote:**Tash ur sentences r too long 4 me so u lost ur structure

didn't make sense but OK.

by **DJ.Parker** » Apr 8th, '07, 06:18

Tash8 wrote:
DJ.Parker wrote:**Tash ur sentences r too long 4 me so u lost ur structure

didn't make sense but OK.

I mean *flow. Check the second post :confusion:

by **Tash8** » Apr 8th, '07, 06:19

oh lol okay cause i was like wtf, you gave me the vote for structure but you lost me on it..

thanks for clearing it up.

by **Tash8** » Apr 8th, '07, 08:15

Vote !!!!

by **Tash8** » Apr 8th, '07, 17:35

come on more votes,

BREASTS INSIDE!

by **Tash8** » Apr 8th, '07, 19:53

by **IceAxe** » Apr 8th, '07, 21:29

vote, or you'll make the newly risen Jesus cry :'(

by **IceAxe** » Apr 8th, '07, 23:48

You could've prevented this...all you had to do was vote....

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