HoldStrong Chorus

[Tash8]

Hello,

UPDATED: http://www.zshare.net/audio/holdstrongbg-mp3.html


I actually think this is a very big improvement from my last one, not saying much but yea...

again.. constructive criticism please

thanks

[Hadez]

i think you were talking with too much breathe into the mic.. if that makes sense . it was kinda hard to hear the beat over your voice so its hard to critique it. i dont remember hearing any drums, any particular reason why you didnt want drums in it? how much did your mic cost?

[Tash8]

my MIC IS SHIT, lol

I didn't use drums cuz i suck at them..

I don't know why theirs soo much breath...umm about the beat, crap I dont know how to make it louder now than i've mixed the vocals and beat together

i'll be getting a mic soon if i improve at this

[Hadez]

if you listen to other beats that other people have made, you might could get a feel for how the drums should sound, dont copy'em though . about the volume, dont u have the beat saved separate from the vocals somewhere? or did you replace it with the whole piece?

[Tash8]

no i do have it saved, but I did a lot of changes, hold on let me try to get it though.

[Tash8]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/holdstrongexc-mp3.html

Is that better?

[Hadez]

now the vocals are too weak, hahaha. thats ok, i read your other posts that said you weren't worried about vocals. its ok not to add vocals to it.

[DJ.Parker]

from what did u make the beats? and agree with Hadez. Better beat than ur previous works

[Global]

Tash why dont you buy a new one?

[MoBrat]

ok well not great i can't really hear what ur saying so i can't really say much on this...

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you dont use drums

ok i dont make beats but isnt the most important thing in a beat the drum pattern ?

[AspirinE]

ummm.... waste of thread.

[Tash8]

you dont use drums

ok i dont make beats but isnt the most important thing in a beat the drum pattern ?

The reason I didn't use any drums is cuz i was having a problem with them. Hadez just PMed me and told me how to do something and i'll be trying it out.. Cuz next week i got a week off, so i'll sure improve

and Asprinie, ok your admin if it's a waste why isn't it trashed. leave me alone I don't your bitchy comments, when I just started making these only a lil bit ago and I sttill don't know half the functions and shit.

[AspirinE]

and Asprinie, ok your admin if it's a waste why isn't it trashed. leave me alone I don't your bitchy comments, when I just started making these only a lil bit ago and I sttill don't know half the functions and shit.

I'm not bitching im stating facts, u cloud urself with an illusion that its worth listening, go learn the functions first.

[Tash8]

I knw it's not worth listening, but i show it to aask if its an improvement...