Smart Talks - Tash8 (First Audio)(Updated)

[Tash8]

Hello,

http://www.zshare.net/audio/tash8-mp3.html (newly mixed by mobrat)

I finally I finished my first audio because I listened to someone and stopped working on beats..

I got this beat from soundclick so thanks to everyone who told me to go there.

Please give some feed.

AGAIN, my first audio and my mic is shit.

Thanks

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

well imma be critical to help you


you need to flow more, practice by flowing to well known beats witch alreayd have a flow form the rapper who used it imprinted on it, but dont use that as your own track dont steal someone elses flow just use it to help you get the feel of flowing

more emotion, better mic

lyrics were ok for what i understood

basically work on everyhting and practice ya flow

[Tash8]

well imma be critical to help you


you need to flow more, practice by flowing to well known beats witch alreayd have a flow form the rapper who used it imprinted on it, but dont use that as your own track dont steal someone elses flow just use it to help you get the feel of flowing

more emotion, better mic

lyrics were ok for what i understood

basically work on everyhting and practice ya flow

thanks man, great feed i know i need practice, this was my first audio ever, i had never even rapped into a mic before lol, anyways yea i'lll keep practicing.

btw did I steal a beat or something? cuz i thought it was free from soundclick

[Tash8]

Lyrics:

*Chorus*
Hip to Hop, I call it's time for my drop.
I roll to every town and Mars is my next stop.
I'll never stop, till I hit the top,
crop, my images cause they bout to hit the spot
Hip to Hop, I call it's time for my drop.
Gangster, no I ain't, cause I don't need to get shot.
Nor do I need cops,
showing up at my door because smart talks
crop, my images because they bout to hit the spot

*Verse 1*
Hands up for hiphop and death comes to Pop.
Rap was dying out so I decided to drum my drops
Gangster, who needs gangster, oh here comes the cops.
rollin' with the truest, peepz who stun the shop
all these dope singles, but this one will hit the charts.
and when I say "Hi" the glock cocks
Then these shots surround me,
none of them harm or sound me.
but i spit this and all the sudden yall crown me.
being all groupie and clownly
and now you say:

*Chorus*
Hip to Hop, I call it's time for my drop.
I roll to every town and Mars is my next stop.
I'll never stop, till I hit the top,
crop, my images cause they bout to hit the spot
Hip to Hop, I call it's time for my drop.
Gangster, no I ain't, cause I don't need to get shot.
Nor do I need cops,
showing up at my door because of my smart talks
crop, my images because they bout to hit the spot

*Verse 2*
Now it's on, i'll roll up some six people in a shit thong
and use it as a blunt.
of course then I'll need some powerful protection
so I put a condom on my whole body then all the other g's get an errection.
Then I'll become a legand, not from rap
but living my life without a consience,
people can say that's nonesense, but
when I --------- so it's been off since
I ain't no king, i'm just a hot prince
and plus I rap to sell and sell to rap
I don't put out shit, cuz that's seldom crap
and if you don't like my music you better adapt.
you can't escape it, it surrounds you and now your trapt.



*Chorus*
Hip to Hop, I call it's time for my drop.
I roll to every town and Mars is my next stop.
I'll never stop, till I hit the top,
crop, my images cause they bout to hit the spot
Hip to Hop, I call it's time for my drop.
Gangster, no I ain't, cause I don't need to get shot.
Nor do I need cops,
showing up at my door because of my smart talks
crop, my images because they bout to hit the spot

*Verse 3*
I'm so creepy I have my own cribville
I just took a three hour shit but i gotta shit still.
I ain't smart but I got these wit skills
I'm about to blow you god damn whips still
and I have a mystic in me,
which makes me unique,
and you'll see, that i'm one of a kind,
and you'll find, that my rhymes, are mine,
the fact is i'm not even working hard, not even tryin'.
you copy, i'll torture you to sleep then you dyin'.
cut the crap, i don't need these creep men whinin'
stop, if you do then you might be fine then.

*Chorus*
Hip to Hop, I call it's time for my drop.
I roll to every town and Mars is my next stop.
I'll never stop, till I hit the top,
crop, my images cause they bout to hit the spot
Hip to Hop, I call it's time for my drop.
Gangster, no I ain't, cause I don't need to get shot.
Nor do I need cops,
showing up at my door because of my smart talks
crop, my images because they bout to hit the spot

I wrote these in about 10 min just because i wanted to do an audio for pratice.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

well imma be critical to help you


you need to flow more, practice by flowing to well known beats witch alreayd have a flow form the rapper who used it imprinted on it, but dont use that as your own track dont steal someone elses flow just use it to help you get the feel of flowing

more emotion, better mic

lyrics were ok for what i understood

basically work on everyhting and practice ya flow

thanks man, great feed i know i need practice, this was my first audio ever, i had never even rapped into a mic before lol, anyways yea i'lll keep practicing.

btw did I steal a beat or something? cuz i thought it was free from soundclick

no if you downloaded it free from soundclick then you aint stealing nothing

[Tash8]

oh alright thanks for clearing that up.

[Xray]

damn man dat song had no energy in it at all. like bar said man u needa improve ur flow big time and ur lyrics too man cause in that song u used too much top drop pop cop hop shit like dat aint good man but alrite for a first audio just keep trying and put energy wid ur flow and lyrical shit and you'll hav no problems making audios

[Tash8]

your right i didn't have energy in it, i'm making something now that hopefully has a lot more.

[B.A.D.]

a few tips:

- don't get too close to the mic and rap louder
- record it as many times as it takes to be great

for being your first audio it ain't bad.... but you need practise

in no time you'll be good enough to get cha sum nice respect...

propz

[Tash8]

thanks ^, I need a new mic, because the mic i have now, if you get to close then all you hear is me breathing..

but i will follow those tips

thanks for feeds, and more feed please

[DJ.Parker]

lyrics r ok......btw it sounds like ur talkin through ur nose. practice and as someone said b4 don't get too much close to the mic

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

yea flow is missing.. and lyrics r ok...and quality is well...
like the other said.....keep practising...i just started with this rap thing...i need practise too
so keep it up

[Tash8]

thanks for the posts

[$0 R3@L]

Look, im going to be honest, inorder to have a good track you need some basic if not bottom line talent, and that you lack. But no worries, because 99.9 percent of the people on this site that have audios lack skills, so your not alone (plus hundreds and thousands of other internet users). The problem is to many kids are now running to record rap, its those kids that ruin the rap game, and crush the underground scene for any rappers with acctual talent, and their are many... You might beable to improve your flow, but theirs a basic silver line that determines how good you will ever be? Im sorry, im just sick and tired of every kid with a computer mic rapping, it was cute and fun at first, but now its becoming pathetic. Can we please jump off this rolercoaster of idiocracy.

harsh but 100% freakin true!

[Tash8]

Look, im going to be honest, inorder to have a good track you need some basic if not bottom line talent, and that you lack. But no worries, because 99.9 percent of the people on this site that have audios lack skills, so your not alone (plus hundreds and thousands of other internet users). The problem is to many kids are now running to record rap, its those kids that ruin the rap game, and crush the underground scene for any rappers with acctual talent, and their are many... You might beable to improve your flow, but theirs a basic silver line that determines how good you will ever be? Im sorry, im just sick and tired of every kid with a computer mic rapping, it was cute and fun at first, but now its becoming pathetic. Can we please jump off this rolercoaster of idiocracy.

I understand what your saying... but i kinda do this for fun if you know what I mean... I don't expect to become big or shit, i just do this for the reason i post on this forum... and plus my first record with a shitty mic, who knows I might have talent? like i said i have never done it before..