Jotted Notes

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Apr 14th, '07, 21:20

downloading now, ill give full review sa-oon

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Apr 14th, '07, 22:00

typing while listening

intro - lol scarfman , lyrics tight flow tight i love the beat i keep bobbing my head to it, there is a point were you slurr apart from that everything is sick

daydream - told you before, love this track

crazy rap 2 - lyrics on this are tight, crazy rap is always funny lmao, flow is fine aswell, the beat is so different but it works, the added fill ins are class lmao

im high/hah - speech kills it, your verse is good not your best but it is old, and the third verse is pure genuis

Rain - lyrics on this are good, nice story telling through it, flow is kool, some points you sounded as if you were running out of breath but it wasnt bad or ruined it or anything, good little story track

Wont stop - favourite track so far, coz i relate to the concept almost identicaly lol, lyrics are good and flow is great, best thing about this is the beat sample and the content, defiantly one of my fav ever form you, sick track man

say ft asp - first verse is good flow on it is great, lyrics are nice and concept/content is sick aswell, sample is kool, were do you get the beats with samples from ? i need more lol second verse second verse again is great, flow and lyric concept content

asp kills it great flow and lyrics, this si probly the best track so far but not my favourite but defiantly best flow n lyrics n stuff

the start of K.I - this is sick, tempo and style of your flow is great on this, lyrics are tight, oh and btw im from the uk and not in the war..i want it with you all :laughing:

j/p , all verses are sick man, near flawless if it had the lay overs fill ins ect.. great track

thoughts on paper - defiantly best flow so far, and mart beats flawless as per usual, lyrics are great aswell, the full track of this si goni be sick as fuck, chorus is sick aswell

ready to devour remix - if you like that style of beat then they would love this, personelly i aint feeling the beat so it ruins the track for me but flow and lyrics are fine through out

Bonus Track - roflmao!!!!!!! MURDERRRRRRRRRRRR MURDERRRRRR, omg i hillarious :laughing:

this shit is hillarious man, your verse basically kills him for the fact you tell the truth, favourite track lmao

overall - its pretty strong through-out and the flow and lyrics are all great, it would have been better if ( like you said ) the lay overs and stuff and everyhting for mastered ect. but still got dope tracks that will be listening to for a bit, defiantly hyped up your tape more man you improved since the killa collection stuff, and if the tape is 10x better itll be off the hook

great work man :worship:

by **°[~CHR!$~]°** » Apr 14th, '07, 22:07

downloadin now...

by **°[~CHR!$~]°** » Apr 14th, '07, 23:05

typin while listen.....

bonus track- lmao.....

nice lyrics :happy:

intro-luv it...dope as fuck :worship:

...sick job man

daydream-chill song(fo me).....relaxin

im high-yea speech is killa(not person

) on this.....good track...

crazy rap 2-kooooool....nice man

thoughts on paper- awesome beat...and lyrics just....*wow-effect*

rain-boring.... :sleeping:

.........sry :sweating:

anywayz lyrics are okay :sweating:

say- nice man....good collab :flower:

both of u

wont stop- is tight....like it very much..prolly fav track too

start of K.I- kool.....nice dark feeling... :8)

ready to devour(remix)- nice flow....track is aight :thumbsup:

(^no order)

overall: liked it,,,enjoyable :flower:

..(shorter than bars feed but :happy:

)

by **$0 R3@L** » Apr 14th, '07, 23:11

firstly lemme say soz to hear bout your grandad r.i.p

downloading now bruv.

by **Global** » Apr 15th, '07, 07:45

i love the headings ( no homo )

by **mart85** » Apr 15th, '07, 19:16

I downloaded it and every song sucks :tounge2:

lol just kidding, I haven't listened to it, I will soon and leave feed later this week :8)

by **Global** » Apr 16th, '07, 07:23

Killa wrote:^ waaaaaaaaa

the headings are creatve

by **AspirinE** » Apr 16th, '07, 18:35

Intro - Captain scarface is kinda slow. I love the raps on this, better then u used to rhyme, i can say that i enjoyed the rhymes themselves too.

Daydream - I like the concept, even the lyrics, good quality and the flow fits... BUT ... the mixing man, it sounds way too amateur, experiment in blending ur acapela, its wat makes a song a song.

Crazy rap II - Nice rhymes, and u finally added some effects lol, i like it, but needs mixing like a baby seals in the western north need saving from savage canadian hunters.

Rain - Pretty decent, best shit i heard so far, still needs mixing ur acepela doesnt blend into the beat at all.

Hah - Speech sounded dope on this(felt like he could use some more concentration delivery though, but it sounded good enough for), Killa dropped nice rhymes, this verse is mixed somewhat better but it could use some highlights. Bars verse - sorry dont like :|

Wont stop - loving the lyrics, good flow (id tweak it abit), 2nd favourite tracks on the tape.

The start of KI - I like the beat, pretty cool rhymes, thanx for the mention brother, this song could use some energy though, (i liked verse 3 most).

Thought on paper - me like this is what ur heading for, its definately a step forward, good mixing and well mixed hook definately livens ur songs up.

Ready to devour - I like it, just like i like the original, the FX were a bit too loud though. 3rd most favourite song on the tape.

bonus track - Comedy man, funny shit. :8)

Overall: ur songs lack highlights and proper mixing, i KNOW you can do better, and maybe you could put more confidence into what you say.

by **$0 R3@L** » Apr 17th, '07, 18:04

Intro - Wow your lyrics and flow have improved alot,this track showcases this.Needs overlays and a few effects but this is a great start man.7/10

Daydream - I think ive heard this on your radio show with bra.Its a great track i like it alot.Your lyrics and flow and delievery here is all excellent.Best track you've ever done so far.9/10

Crazy rap II - flow and lyrics are brilliant here.I hear a few effects (yey lol).The mixing could of made this 1000x better.Overall its a great track.6/10

Hah - speech as ever was brilliant!!!! :worship:

raid time mofos :shifty:

.Killa your verse was ok here.The mixing was improved.I heard some effects and even overlays.Bars verse was terrible here :sweating:

just wernt feeling it even a bit.

Rain - great track concept.Great beat.Great lyrics.Great flow.I like it alot. 7/10

Wont stop - the only track so far where your flow goes of beat.The beat itself is ok and a decent choice.Lyrics are pretty decent also.5/10

say- loved the beat.This track killa you sounded alot like 'the streets' kina talking/rap style,lol i like it.Got a layed back chilled out feel.Asp as ever is brilliant.8/10

The start of KI - acapella is mixed wellllll to loud here.The beats pretty decent but the mixing takes away from the beat.Lyrically its actually great.5/10

thoughts on paper - production here makes you sound 100 times better.flow and lyrics was all pretty decent.Im guessing this was mart85 production?.7/10

ready to devour - the original was ok but this remix was a little better.Your delievery was alot better.The beat was a ok choice.6/10

bonus track - pretty funny IMO.However them fools are long gone now so rapping at them is pointless.Pretty good job though.

final thoughts is that the only thing letting you down is mixing and production.Your delievery has improved alot but still need to put more emotion into it.Good job overall though man some of your best stuff here.

by **$0 R3@L** » Apr 19th, '07, 00:27

bump for killa.

a mixtape takes 10/20 hours in total to create,a message of feed takes 5 minutes max,come on people!!!

by **mart85** » Apr 19th, '07, 01:07

yeah I will leave feed soon killa, I just didn't have time to listen to it properly to give intelligent feed lol

by **mart85** » Apr 19th, '07, 17:09

Intro Wow Captiain Scarfman is awesome :8)

your raps are nice, good rhymes... I enjoyed this track, it had a nice beat...

Daydream - really nice track, I like the sample in the chorus... your delivery was nice here

Crazy rap II -I like that beat... like others said, better mixing would have helped, cause it's a strong song

Hah - nice verse by speech here... killa too... altho to be honest, I'm not feeling the beat, so I can't really enjoy the song that much... and bar, you can do alot better :sweating:

Rain - cool beat... I liked the lyrics, and the overall concept, it's real nice

Wont stop - nice sample again... and good lyrics from you, pretty strong track :8)

say- I liked that beat, is different and it works... and I thought your delivery was good in that, I was feeling it... dope verse by ASP again

The start of KI - mix is a bit weird, but I just love that beat lol... and you flowed well to it, delivery could be a little better, but it's still nice

thoughts on paper - just awesome :shocked:

lol, nice delivery/flow in that, and the other verses are as strongs :shifty:

ready to devour - didn't really like the beat, but your parts were good, you had nice delivery

bonus track - lmao funny bonus track

I think your POTP tape's gonna be great... cause those songs have potential, they just need a little better mixing sometimes, or a better delivery... and like you said, you know you can do 10X better, so your tape is gonna be hot :8)

keep it up :worship:

by **ThomasAguanis** » Apr 19th, '07, 20:42

downloading now. I'll leave feed in a day or so or whenever I get to listen to it...and sorry to hear about your step granddad.

by **ThomasAguanis** » Apr 19th, '07, 21:16

my internet stopped working last Tuesday when they installed fiber optic telephone lines. Verizion sucks as a company and I just got net back today BUT now on fiber optic I can get speeds up to 200MBPS so it's def worth the wait if its that fucking fast :laughing:

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