Bar Vs Tash8 (Bar Wins 3-0 KO)

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

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3-0 ko

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

i smash tash eight with the back lash fate you weak, like you smoking from the wack hash plate
your ryhmes be straight like a hill im straight to the kill i create whats ill you just copie em's skill

change your name so you dont look groupie, on the mic your spit be slevers, all droopy
look see the only killer thing about you a detect is the rich boy way you net connect

but i rip you faster when i spit to disaster your flow be sloppy like some plaster
im the master the battle paster you see my skill and be slipping like you on a castor

[Tash8]

Fuck the System brought more shit than my Cock and Rectum
He's So Wackish I Necked Him and He's So Fagish I 'Nexed Him

my Lyrics, I Complexed Them, so when you Hear It, they had Perplexed Him
I Beat It, so who Next Then? Bar's shit Reflects Him, 'n' broke his Necks Then

Your Spinal Cord, I cut it and leave your Mind with Holes, your face Blinds like Moles, Grind them Spores
He's wishing I'm the next Guy he Scores, too bad I ain't a One-of-those, my pics you can Cum to Those



'Nexed: Annexed
Fuck The System: Bar's EP

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

votes

[Hadez]

im not really sure how to vote for this one

FLOW: Tash.... Bar i had a hard time getting yours to flow cuz the lines were so long
STRUCTURE: Bar
PUNCHES: Bar... your's were more personal, Tash's really just consisted of the typical spinal cord eminem shit.
RHYMES: Tash
MULTI: Bar
NAMEPLAY: Bar
OTHER: Tash.... it was just easier to read.

vote Bar.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

1-0

[BaZZ]

Structure: Bar
Punches: Bar
Nameplay: Bar
Flow: Bar
Personals: Tash8
Punches: Bar
Rhymes: Tash8
Complexity: Tash8
Multies: Bar
Other: Bar (more enjoyable read)

O/A: Bar

[Tash8]

2-0

can you guys explain how he won structure, cause i've been trying to work on my structure soo...

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

2-0

can you guys explain how he won structure, cause i've been trying to work on my structure soo...

my lines a neaerer the same size than yours

[Tash8]

oh so it's not by bars but by the whole thing?

[BaZZ]

2-0

can you guys explain how he won structure, cause i've been trying to work on my structure soo...

urs:

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best structure:

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[Tash8]

ohhhhhhh ok, I thought it was just each bar lines.. thanks

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

ohhhhhhh ok, I thought it was just each bar lines.. thanks

mines wasnt great i get sloppy with structure now

but if you want the trick to always keep it best, just count how many words are in the lines, always keep it on say 10 words a line in every bar and your structure is perfect lol

[Hadez]

^ thats a good idea.

i might hafta try that
i always the altered a word. like getting and gettin, or "and" and "n" to shorten or lengthen a line.

[Tash8]

lol same, that's why you see me use 'n' at one point