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New Beat - Oh Dang

Postby Tash8 » Apr 27th, '07, 05:57

http://www.zshare.net/audio/ohdang-mp3.html

I just made this beat and would like some feed

and propz to ice for all the help :worship: :worship:

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Postby DelinQuent » Apr 27th, '07, 05:59

sounds kinda spooky lol. it's a little to repetitve. add some new elements and extend the loop or something. keep workin.
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 27th, '07, 06:05

i know i was gonna make it like 15 sec loop but i didn't have time..
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Postby Hadez » Apr 27th, '07, 06:56

wow big improvement in my opinion. you finally got rhythm in the drums, thats good. but like DelinQuent said, its repititive. besides that, great improvement, props. keep it up :flower:
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 27th, '07, 14:48

Hadez wrote:wow big improvement in my opinion. you finally got rhythm in the drums, thats good. but like DelinQuent said, its repititive. besides that, great improvement, props. keep it up :flower:


thanks, yea i'll make sure to make bigger loops :D

more feed please
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Postby $0 R3@L » Apr 27th, '07, 14:58

needs strings and bass.Theres a little melody there but need to expand it futher.Make the loops alot longer cause its like playing a scratched viynl.

Alot! better then the old stuff u done.
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Postby DJ.Parker » Apr 27th, '07, 15:03

nice....but i feel like something is missing. Big improvement though :worship:
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 27th, '07, 15:07

thanks guys, yea i hoped it was a big improvement, I'll start learning the basics too strings and bases before i use them ;)
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Postby IceAxe » Apr 27th, '07, 15:24

def. extend the loop. The melody starts out kinda decent, but it just... ends and leaves the listener wanting more. the drum pattern is kinda simple. Overall, big improvement.

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