Mentally Ill Freestlye (A Must Feed)

by **Rain Matrix** » Apr 27th, '07, 04:58

Haters Faker than a Razor thru Paper, so Critic Spit Quick Elaboration
I flow Straighter 2 Cater 2 foes I'll beat Later, when they Visit Fabrication
u Try, I Don't, thats Why I Won't Drop Free, talkin all that u best Not Be
Doom Records a Room Wrecker, yur Anthem is Chancing who can Stop Me

by **Hoopz** » Apr 27th, '07, 05:22

not feelin that vtech line at all....

show some damn respect

by **DelinQuent** » Apr 27th, '07, 05:58

yeah, that VT line pretty much ruined it. very very distasteful. other than that it's very jumbled, try freestyling to a beat.

by **$0 R3@L** » Apr 27th, '07, 11:39

its just aload of babble man,no beat,no flow,no delievery.At least try and rap rather then just talk.This is just futher proof that yes its cool to write writtens andtake part in text rap battles but that dont make you anymore of a emcee/rapper.

keep working on it.

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Apr 27th, '07, 15:56

$0 R3@L wrote:its just aload of babble man,no beat,no flow,no delievery.At least try and rap rather then just talk.This is just futher proof that yes its cool to write writtens andtake part in text rap battles but that dont make you anymore of a emcee/rapper.

keep working on it.

by **Rain Matrix** » Apr 27th, '07, 17:28

1st of all, when I rhyme 2 abeat u say u can't hear me

2nd of all, that Vtech line in retrospect was a bad decision but it got my psycho point across, so u have a better rhyme 4 Inner Death?

3rdly Whose been on my neo about makin an audio and then not 1 positive comment, I apolgize again 4 tha ill advised line but I was hoping it show my potential by rhyming naything at anytime, most of this was multi's

4thly I will make anotha accapella, some beats make tha rapper, I just make lyrics

by **$0 R3@L** » Apr 27th, '07, 18:35

no beats dont make a rapper they make a rap track.Your acapella verses just have no flow or delievery and end up just sound like babble from an intoxicated loon pot.Yes you can write but as of yet your cant audio,and to be classed a rapper you need audio.

So go away and learn how to put together a actual rap track including all the elements; beat,flow,lyrics,delievery rather then just 'raining' us with another acapella.

by **MoBrat** » Apr 27th, '07, 19:05

.wav?? y not mp3....lyrically not bad but everything else isn't great...try simple lyrics untill u get the flow cause 2 many multies can screw with the flow...

by **Inches** » Apr 28th, '07, 00:33

$0 R3@L wrote:its just aload of babble man,no beat,no flow,no delievery.At least try and rap rather then just talk.This is just futher proof that yes its cool to write writtens andtake part in text rap battles but that dont make you anymore of a emcee/rapper.

keep working on it.

by **Tash8** » Apr 28th, '07, 00:50

first of all, rap louder and to be honest it sounded like those guys who get on stage in like coffee society and recite a poem. Your like me, you have no flow, no emotion and no energy..

1) To improve flow, use simple lyrics then go higher

2) emotion and energy, you gotta imagine yourself infront of a crowd and you are nervous and you just want to spit shit out with all the drama going around you.. you gotta feel like your in the lyrics

those are advices i've recieved and i'm still practicing.

keep it up

. maybe we can collab after you finish your project.

by **Rain Matrix** » Apr 28th, '07, 00:50

I'm a net mercin kamikazee poster Stick 2 yur own flow, I'm 2 complex 2 drop rainstorms like this

by **Kez** » Apr 28th, '07, 00:51

I didn't listen to it, but a Vtech line?

Damn, that's harsh.

by **Tash8** » Apr 28th, '07, 00:57

[quote="Rain Matrix"]I'm a net mercin kamikazee poster Stick 2 yur own flow, I'm 2 complex 2 drop rainstorms like this[/qoute]

wtf are you talking about.

by **Rain Matrix** » Apr 28th, '07, 01:14

Tash8 wrote:
Rain Matrix wrote:I'm a net mercin kamikazee poster Stick 2 yur own flow, I'm 2 complex 2 drop rainstorms like this[/qoute]

wtf are you talking about.

Why do I have 2 be talkin about anything.. maybe I just felt like sayin that... I beat u I felt like remembering that

by **Tash8** » Apr 28th, '07, 01:18

i never dissed you or anything, i just gave you constructive criticism and if you can't handle that then don't post anything here.

who cares if you beat me, congratufuckinlation, you've been battling way more than i have, my first time was less than 2-3 month ago.

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