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Postby mart85 » Apr 17th, '07, 05:17

thanks for checking everybody :happy:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 18th, '07, 23:57

mart85 wrote:thanks for checking everybody :happy:


no porblem mart :shifty:
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Apr 21st, '07, 02:51

I kinda have to agree with hayzi too. this song is pretty sick. both of you did awesome on it and mart is amazing as always. keep it up guys :worship:









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am i being pointed at?

,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:yeh man some of the tapes in the next coming months will be amazing
*points to thomas*


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Postby randomghost » Apr 21st, '07, 15:13

another bar song, damn i love the song but i dont think it goes wid phantoms style :sweating: but its ok nice track man....

bump for bar :smoking:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 21st, '07, 15:15

ThomasAguanis wrote:I kinda have to agree with hayzi too. this song is pretty sick. both of you did awesome on it and mart is amazing as always. keep it up guys :worship:









*feels weird* :unsure:

am i being pointed at?

,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:yeh man some of the tapes in the next coming months will be amazing
*points to thomas*


:shocked: :oops: :worship:



thx man :worship:

and yeh i pointed you :tounge2: :D :p lol


@random - thx man :worship: i thought phantom went awesome with it :unsure: but ok lol :D :D
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Postby TheWeirdoIsBack » Apr 21st, '07, 21:41

Sick stuff man, this is the first time I've heard Phantom I believe, a great introduction to him. The beat was pretty sweet, different from what I'm used to, but props to mart. First verse wasn't bad, Bar your flow was crazy on this one, but I think it should have been a bit longer, it just felt short to me. Second verse, Phantom's ryhmes were insane, and his voice sounded nice on this beat. Only drawback, his verse was even shorter than the first one. Third verse I think was lyrically better than the first one, and the flow sounded a bit cleaner as well.

Overall, only thing I didn't like was the fact that it's a bit too short, I think you guys could have added a bit more to some of the verses. But perhaps its best to make a great shorter song, than a good longer song sometimes. Leave us wantin more lol.

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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 21st, '07, 21:42

TheWeirdoIsBack wrote:Sick stuff man, this is the first time I've heard Phantom I believe, a great introduction to him. The beat was pretty sweet, different from what I'm used to, but props to mart. First verse wasn't bad, Bar your flow was crazy on this one, but I think it should have been a bit longer, it just felt short to me. Second verse, Phantom's ryhmes were insane, and his voice sounded nice on this beat. Only drawback, his verse was even shorter than the first one. Third verse I think was lyrically better than the first one, and the flow sounded a bit cleaner as well.

Overall, only thing I didn't like was the fact that it's a bit too short, I think you guys could have added a bit more to some of the verses. But perhaps its best to make a great shorter song, than a good longer song sometimes. Leave us wantin more lol.

4/5


well the track average length...its like 3 minutes i think, it might just sound shorter coz its faster paced lol


thx for the review man :worship: :worship:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 24th, '07, 18:05

bump because i wanne \:D/
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Postby HAYZI » Apr 26th, '07, 17:45

finally got around to have a decent listen to the tape lol

i love livin the life, its pretty much got everything youd want and is missin nothin

Demolition Time - sick track, cant say much more i love it

pride - i had this on my mp3 player for ages so i dont need to listen again, great track up with the best tracks put on TR

this is why - great track man, i love ur concepts and lyrical content

the last time, sounds wicked so far, flow goes off a bit from time to time, love the line "they shud and wud control you, but im not a television u cant push ,my buttons so button ur mouth"! fire

racist thought - hook sounds great beats great ur verses are pretty good, didnt like kezs verse (no hate if u read this)

the words i shud say - again good concept and lyrical content, overall i dont rele like the overall sound


patriot is really good concept and beat and the way uve put like the hook to it, but im sure what it was it mite of been the reverb on the overlays that slightly spoilt it cos the overall sounnd and quality was effect


the system - very good lyrics a lot of truth said but flow lacked a little, beat had a good mood and atmosphere but the beat was great when ur talkin but overall i think the beat was wrong



overall a ver good tape u had stuff to say, u werent just rhymin words , ur hooks are great, catchy and had meaning, beats and mixin was spot on except for the system (imo)
the only thing uve got to work on is your delivery, its fine most of the time but sumtimes i dont konw if its a time thing or bein lazy lol its the only advice i can rele give u (which is a good thing a year ago the list wud be a lot longer lol)

glad i got the chnce to hear it i didnt regret spedning my time :D
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 26th, '07, 17:48

HAYZI wrote:finally got around to have a decent listen to the tape lol

i love livin the life, its pretty much got everything youd want and is missin nothin

Demolition Time - sick track, cant say much more i love it

pride - i had this on my mp3 player for ages so i dont need to listen again, great track up with the best tracks put on TR

this is why - great track man, i love ur concepts and lyrical content

the last time, sounds wicked so far, flow goes off a bit from time to time, love the line "they shud and wud control you, but im not a television u cant push ,my buttons so button ur mouth"! fire

racist thought - hook sounds great beats great ur verses are pretty good, didnt like kezs verse (no hate if u read this)

the words i shud say - again good concept and lyrical content, overall i dont rele like the overall sound


patriot is really good concept and beat and the way uve put like the hook to it, but im sure what it was it mite of been the reverb on the overlays that slightly spoilt it cos the overall sounnd and quality was effect


the system - very good lyrics a lot of truth said but flow lacked a little, beat had a good mood and atmosphere but the beat was great when ur talkin but overall i think the beat was wrong



overall a ver good tape u had stuff to say, u werent just rhymin words , ur hooks are great, catchy and had meaning, beats and mixin was spot on except for the system (imo)
the only thing uve got to work on is your delivery, its fine most of the time but sumtimes i dont konw if its a time thing or bein lazy lol its the only advice i can rele give u (which is a good thing a year ago the list wud be a lot longer lol)

glad i got the chnce to hear it i didnt regret spedning my time :D


props on the review man :worship: :worship:


ive worked on delivery alot for my new tape witch should be out in a couple weeks :D

again thx for the feed man :worship:
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Postby DOPE » Apr 27th, '07, 08:23

great flow from you guys, i like Bar's lyrics


and the beat haha, thats just amazing stuff Mart,


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Postby Phantom » Apr 27th, '07, 20:49

chyea!!

holy matrimony !

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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 28th, '07, 15:53

DOPE wrote:great flow from you guys, i like Bar's lyrics


and the beat haha, thats just amazing stuff Mart,


im in a rush so ima save this shit for later, got other shit to download since i got my homies fast ass wireless internet for a day


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