When Darkness Strikes [Beat]

by **Tash8** » May 2nd, '07, 06:39

Hello,

I created this beat, which was mainly inspired by Mobrat.

I might be using this with Mobrat on our collab, if he likes it, but can you feed it?

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Thanks,
Tash8

by **Hadez** » May 2nd, '07, 07:16

typin while listenin.

the drums n strings are off beat with each other, or at least sound like it. i'd tweak the string melody a bit. i dont like how every once in a while u gotta strong string note, kinda throws it off. and at the chorus it sounds like a completely different beat, like it wasn't made for the rest of the main beat.

no hate, just my opinions :flower:

by **°[~CHR!$~]°** » May 2nd, '07, 12:57

i like it....

good work
keep at it
yea wut hadez said isnt wrong tho....the chorus is kinda weird :unsure:

by **Tash8** » May 2nd, '07, 16:02

thanks, and you that noise i'll fix cause it is really really annoying, and i'll somehow fix the chorus.

thanks

by **AspirinE** » May 2nd, '07, 16:17

the strings dont go the drums and u added one snare there somewhere which completely ruins the tempo.
When ur making ur melody out of step by step notes, u should try to fit the note to a position that fits to a snare or a drum or at least the hi hat hits (i usually use a one gap hi hat pattern to concentrate on my tempo, sorta like a music clock)

and then after a minute wtf... is that noise that fades in?

by **Tash8** » May 2nd, '07, 16:22

AspirinE wrote:the strings dont go the drums and u added one snare there somewhere which completely ruins the tempo.
When ur making ur melody out of step by step notes, u should try to fit the note to a position that fits to a snare or a drum or at least the hi hat hits (i usually use a one gap hi hat pattern to concentrate on my tempo, sorta like a music clock)

and then after a minute wtf... is that noise that fades in?

alright thanks, I'll try to do it again, and the chorus part is complete trash, I can't find any strings that match with any drums

I really suck at strings is there some tutorial I can look at just to see how much people use them?

thanks

by **Kez** » May 2nd, '07, 17:34

As for the beat it's okay considering you've only just started.
The chorus is a bit weird, and the drums sound a bit off but apart from that it's okay.

by **MoBrat** » May 2nd, '07, 20:05

Kez wrote:Not the best person to collab with Tash, he'll probably be too drunk to record properly.

As for the beat it's okay considering you've only just started.
The chorus is a bit weird, and the drums sound a bit off but apart from that it's okay.

holy shit man u ever gonna quit with that shit i haven't said a damn thing about u since we had a problem then u made a track dissing my dead sister and ur putting it on ur tape but i never said shit 2 u...guy that was the past get over it and grow up man :shakehead:

as 4 the beat i agree the chorus sounds like it's 4 a different beat but hey what can i say it's better then i could make...

by **Kez** » May 2nd, '07, 20:07

MoBrat wrote:holy shit man u ever gonna quit with that shit i haven't said a damn thing about u since we had a problem then u made a track dissing my dead sister and ur putting it on ur tape but i never said shit 2 u...guy that was the past get over it and grow up man

as 4 the beat i agree the chorus sounds like it's 4 a different beat but hey what can i say it's better then i could make...

Hate Us Again is actually a COMPLETELY NEW song. We just named it that because it fits perfectly.

Ax never even fuckin dissed your sister, he said her name by accident, not knowing who she was, so you had a right go at him.

Yeah, you haven't said anything, honestly i wonder why, i mean you already said what you thought of me before in your diss, why can't you finish it?

Mmmm..beef.

by **MoBrat** » May 2nd, '07, 20:25

Kez wrote:Hate Us Again is actually a COMPLETELY NEW song. We just named it that because it fits perfectly.

Ax never even fuckin dissed your sister, he said her name by accident, not knowing who she was, so you had a right go at him.

Yeah, you haven't said anything, honestly i wonder why, i mean you already said what you thought of me before in your diss, why can't you finish it?

dont mean 2 spam ur thread tash....even if it is a new track y even name it the same thing with the same person on it?? :unsure:

A) i got a lot more problems then dealing with u B) all u ever do is trash talk me and i sit and laugh cause ur only wasting ur time doing it...by the sounds of it u want me 2 start this beef again :unsure:

seriously y do u want 2 start this shit again?...any other replys send 2 me on msn or in a pm instead of cluttering up tash's thread

by **Tash8** » May 3rd, '07, 00:56

ehh whatever the beef is more interesting than my beat

by **die2nite** » May 3rd, '07, 02:38

I could see where you'd be going with the strings, it could theoretically sound tight but it's just way to slow here. The snare would be impossible to rap to, just a weird rythym and it's off beat. Also, the chorus just doesn't work at all, mixing two completely seperate things together.

by **B.A.D.** » May 3rd, '07, 03:50

That's Right internet beef is pointless
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and plz don't get me invloved again
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about the beat..... tash.... hmmm....

nah..... the idea is good but I ain't ok...

you gotta master rapping beforeyou get to make beats hahaha

When Darkness Strikes [Beat]

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