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Postby IceAxe » May 17th, '07, 23:11

http://zshare.net/audio/title-under-construction-mp3.html


Feed appreciated



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The climbing, or whatever, sound in the chorus was provided by Tash8
Eveything else done by me
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Postby sixersi349 » May 17th, '07, 23:14

its pretty good
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Postby Tash8 » May 17th, '07, 23:15

I like it, good job man :D
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Postby Hadez » May 18th, '07, 00:01

the drums are kinda weird. but other then that its pretty good, propz, good job, and keep it up :flower:
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Postby IceAxe » May 18th, '07, 00:03

^ thanks for feedin y'all....

More Feed!!
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Postby mart85 » May 18th, '07, 01:09

it's not bad, but I think the drum pattern needs to be fixed... I guess you tried to do something original, but the rhythm is not "steady"... like, if you try to count the beat, you'll notice it's kinda weird...

keep it up tho, it's not bad :happy:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » May 18th, '07, 01:11

i aways give you the same feed but again, just get better sounds, more practice and learn form your mistakes, just keep it up coz you got a nack for it
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Postby IceAxe » May 18th, '07, 01:15

@ mart - yeah i was tryin to do somethin somewhat original, and thanks

@ bar - thanks for feed/advice
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Postby Steve Spag » May 19th, '07, 23:34

I like it, it's pretty good man, keep it up.

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