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One Day One Time [Accapella]

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One Day One Time [Accapella]

Postby Tash8 » May 16th, '07, 00:47

Hello,

I wrote these verses during math class today, so when I got home I just spit them to work on my flow and shit like that.

Listen to Accapella

Lyrics - Verse 1

this slim-pain, in my skim-brain, is very much in-sane
and it-drains, all of my flesh-and-viens, and death-retained
it struck-me in the face, so violently in waste
the side-of-me bled in craze, the strike was tyrantly fast-paced
but I stood up in my past-place, you can [masturbate] on my gaze
in different ways, I sprayed-waves, while sitting my math class
dread-depraved, lying their sleeping like I'm afraid-but-brave
brave, because I got this sense of leniency to sleep-in-class
but 'fraid cause of oversleeping but I need-to-pass that-class
I wake-fast, the pain that deprived me has then been past.

Lyrics - Verse 2

I'm so mothafuckin' cancerous
i brought more diseases to los angeles
than your mom did when handed [piss]
like it was some kinda joke
my lyrics are the #1 antidote
betta than when you sniff or smoke
for girls betta then dicks or dope
and then pricks can only hope
that I don't face you, you joke



*notice, there's no beat because I didn't write these lyrics to a beat.*
*notice 2, those are two different verses.. so please ignore the transition*

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Postby Hadez » May 16th, '07, 01:56

why did you take out masterbate?
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Postby Xray » May 16th, '07, 02:22

Sounds tight man can i try mixing this wid a beat :whistle: than hit you up wid tha mixed version ;)
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Postby Tash8 » May 16th, '07, 03:31

^ yea sure that'd be great

and hadez I removed it cause it's kinda umm let's say just didn't fit the subject you know what i mean?

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Postby Tash8 » May 16th, '07, 06:26

more than 39 views and basically only 1 feed? please feed more!
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Postby Hadez » May 16th, '07, 06:30

i think that you're actually trying, and working on ur delivery. propz and keep practicing.
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Postby randomghost » May 16th, '07, 06:31

nice shit man, flow is tight.....just grab ur ass a mic quick and hit it :happy:
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Postby Tash8 » May 16th, '07, 06:32

randomghost wrote:nice shit man, flow is tight.....just grab ur ass a mic quick and hit it :happy:


thanks, but what does the second statement mean, idk i think i'm really retarted atm.
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » May 16th, '07, 10:52

Tash8 wrote:
randomghost wrote:nice shit man, flow is tight.....just grab ur ass a mic quick and hit it :happy:


thanks, but what does the second statement mean, idk i think i'm really retarted atm.


he justs means get a better mic :sweating: i think
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Postby DJ SWiFT » May 16th, '07, 14:02

hmmmm.....how old r u kid?
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Postby Tash8 » May 16th, '07, 15:36

why does it matter? but 16..

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Postby Tash8 » May 17th, '07, 03:41

bujump please
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Postby DC4952 » May 17th, '07, 04:48

pretty cool, u plan on mixing it with a beat?
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Postby Tash8 » May 17th, '07, 05:19

well i suck at mixing lol, but if anyone else wants to do it for me that'd be chill
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Postby rlxhustlr » May 18th, '07, 06:09

good for being 16 i guess but if you really wanna know that was garbage! props for trying and slow it down a bit....no need to rap so fast....to me it sounded like a lot of gibberish! sry...
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