finally listening to this now

not sure if tracks are in order:
demolition time: i think I left feed on this before. eh oh well.
1st verse was pretty nice. I think you could easily improve your flow on this. not sure how old this is now. lyrics were pretty nice too.
chorus: seemed a bit forced at points and sounded a bit repetitive but it was slightly catchy still.
2nd verse: Sajjad:
the effects could be better, doesn't sound good at parts with it but it's alright. you flow nicely and lyrics are decent too. I think I've heard better form you but can't really remember now.
3rd verse:
flow seems a bit fucked up at the beginning but you get back on track a few lines in. basically same feed as 1st verse although, to be honest, the lyrics were a bit hard to follow at points.
Life is a fight ft. SK:
1st verse: you seem to flow too fast on it but maybe it's just me.

your voice is a bit low at points too.
chorus:sounds good., i guess the voice added is sk, sounds creepy like a ghost or a bit Marlyn Manson sounding but it works.
verse 2: Sk
have no idea what you said, but the flow was sick.
verse 3:
you seem more energetic. flow's slightly improved to my ears but it works on the beat. lyrics were pretty good too
Here to stay ft. ASP:
weird beat..but gets better as you hear it...kinda.
verse 1:
nice flow on this. lyrics seem to your normal standard, maybe flowed a bit off at times but as before, it may just be me.
chorus: eh it's alright. I don't like it much.
Verse 2: ASP
flows nice. lyrics are your normal complexness which we all seem to like. I don't really like the effect on your voice much though
Verse 3:
best verse so far. sounds a bit weird on the "rhyme mind" part but still was good. flow seems better on this too.
You Can't Blame Me:
I like this beat.
seems like it's gonna be good.
verse 1:
love this flow so far. the calmness is nice, different than the other energetic tracks but the softness is great to hear. lyrics are nice too
chorus: def. my favorite so far.I really like it.
verse 2:
same as 1st verse but lyrics seem deeper. the "musical section" part seemed to be a bit off. other than that everything else was on point.
Verse 3:
same as 1st verse. pretty deep lyrics. I can def. relate to parts.
You Don't Know:
Chorus: eh I don;t like it much but it kinda works.
Verse 1:
flow's pretty fast. I'm not feeling it much but you got it down. lyrics seem to slip at parts and the effect at other parts could be improved.
Verse 2:
Hmm flow seems better on this kinda. it's slower which is good to me. lyrics were alright too.
Verse 3:
this flow seems good for the beat so far and lyrics seem like the best of the song.
Overall:
to be honest, I wasn't feeling it much

The beats seemed repetitive like similar types. My favorite track by far was you can't blame me. You seem to like flowing fast which is alright, I just don't like it much (if that matters). Also, you seem to force or try to hard with your lyrics, they just didn't seem right to me for some reason making me not enjoy them much. You need to work on pronouncing some words, but that's a common problem with everyone. You have great emotion and voice projection on your tracks, although your voice is hard to understand or goes to a different volume at points. I'm sure you can easily fix this the more you record and write. Keep it up man
