1st Verse (War Anthem)

by **Ethos** » May 20th, '07, 08:34

Okay here's my first verse to war anthem for those who think i can't rap at all. >_<
i need help with mixing as you can tell. so hit me up if you might wanna give a hand with the final version

http://www.zshare.net/audio/11-war-anth ... e-mp3.html

by **Speech** » May 20th, '07, 10:41

not that bad...butit needs sum serious work on the mixin'
i couldn hear almost anything homie, so idk if the lyrics was cool
i bet they were(lol)
keep it up though and you may improve in mixin' or just holla at sum good mixers here

holla

by **Ethos** » May 20th, '07, 23:57

Thanks for that. Do you think I may have to post the lyrics?
because I listen to it and i can pretty much here everything.
but thats pobably cuz i made it. lol.
thanx for the feed though. :smoking:

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » May 21st, '07, 00:14

your flow is improving alot man :worship:

in a month or 2 if you keep up the practice youll have fire flow

you need to speak up and project your voice a little clearer, also you need to mix the vocals a bit louder or the beat a bit lower, although with practice youll be able to perfect mixing since you control the mixing on the beat and the vocals so you can pretty much master a track to perfection once you learn....i know because ive heard the difference once mart mixes/masters one of my tracks and i can hear were he has went back into his beat and switched the volume of stuff(made a drum or sythn a little louder or quiter) to help my lyrics glue to it more, so just keep practicing with that sorta stuff and you'll see a big improvement

lyrics seemed kool from what i made out :happy:

witch wasnt too much :sweating:

by **Ethos** » May 21st, '07, 00:26

,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:your flow is improving alot man in a month or 2 if you keep up the practice youll have fire flow

you need to speak up and project your voice a little clearer, also you need to mix the vocals a bit louder or the beat a bit lower, although with practice youll be able to perfect mixing since you control the mixing on the beat and the vocals so you can pretty much master a track to perfection once you learn....i know because ive heard the difference once mart mixes/masters one of my tracks and i can hear were he has went back into his beat and switched the volume of stuff(made a drum or sythn a little louder or quiter) to help my lyrics glue to it more, so just keep practicing with that sorta stuff and you'll see a big improvement

lyrics seemed kool from what i made out witch wasnt too much

thanx man. I barely practice that's the thing. =p
but i also go over my lines in head all day for weeks on in before i record them so yeah. thanx.

and i'll practice with mixing it more. and maybe i'll just record it again.cuz im starting to not like the end of the verse. I can barely hear the word snares be said. >_<

by **Phantom** » May 21st, '07, 01:29

my opinion is what the others is

a lil practice and youll be real good

by **DC4952** » May 22nd, '07, 04:45

ya nice verse. flow is improving and delivery is good. i still think that the gangsta song u made is better, and not only cuz the chorus lol

by **Ethos** » May 23rd, '07, 02:57

DC4952 wrote:ya nice verse. flow is improving and delivery is good. i still think that the gangsta song u made is better, and not only cuz the chorus lol

Loser

this one is wasy better. i t actually means something.
the other one was pretty much dickriding maybe :angry:

1st Verse (War Anthem)

1st Verse (War Anthem)

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