IceAxe vs Chet [Iceaxe 4-1]

[lil_bayly]

u want people to vote for this battle yet u dont vote any others?

[IceAxe]

bump

[IceAxe]

No More Votes?

[IceAxe]

bumping yet again

[IceAxe]

bumpin this for the fourth time in a row

[IceAxe]

Big fucking bump

[IceAxe]

it's like "vote now" means anything other than show your opinion at this very moment


vote right now...

[J Roc]

funny.ok gimme a minit an ill vote on it

[J Roc]

If you guys want no advantage taken by the opponent seeing your verse before he drops, send your verses to me or C-Game.

Edit

Chet's verse:

Man your shit sinks like the Titanic
you fight like a fag, dress in drag
swinging your arms in a panic
cause some dude told you to can it
can't stand it, can't ban it, just fan it
til it blows up in your face, like don imus about race


IceAxe's verse:

i got another en-e-my, not even a freind-of-me he's next-to-bleed
this the end-of-he who thinks he can contend-with-me and my complex-i-ty

it's best-ta-cede re-lin-quish-the-steps-ta-beat the beast-of-text
wreck-ya-seeds with re-lent-less-speed-eject-tha-weak, his screed-pro-jects

your flows plain-inert-and-rent-ed, my game- circ-um-vents-it I just subvert-and-dent-it
I can invade ya mind reverse-intents-in and make you convert-it blurt-it at the ten-ent


Explainations

-relinquish - give up, usually giveing up power
-wreck ya seeds - semen = someone's "seed" > im breakin his nuts
-screed- monotonous harnague > harangue - bombastic declamation
-inert- having a limited ability to react
-subvert- destroy completely

- ok... that last line - Im sayin I can get into his brain, and convince him to diss himself, the tenent being the person who uses his mind.... i hope that clears it up

Flow :chet,iceaxe's was kinda hard to read with all the - for his multies'
Structure :chets was a bit better
Punches :iceaxe
Nameplay: none
Rhymes :ice axe had alot more,better to
Multies:ice axe just kept at them
Vocab/Complexity: iceaxe had better vocab
Others, etc:iceaxe

5/2-my votes iceaxe

[IceAxe]

thanks J roc

and yeah i know what ya mean about the - in the mutis..im workin on that

voting is finally closed...after almost a fucking month