by 4D » May 21st, '07, 08:52
I gotta give respect to both battlers here. I checked your call out, and see you dropped your verses within 40 minutes or an hour later, that's cool and nice to see every so often. For me though both of your verses might have suffered a little bit because of it. A bit more care put into the structure and rhyming and either of you could have taken this easily. It's kind of weird the way both of you adopted the same style of tex, it's one of my old ones, I use to capitalise all my multies, but you guys sometimes seem to be capatalising extra words to make em look like multies, but they aren't. As for punches, both had some pretty good ones, chase for a new comer I`m impressed, and hope you stick around and keep improving. I like the way you checked out who Lil Bayly had battled before and used that, gotta research your opponent, but you didn't really hit hard with the punch on that one, also some of the gun rhymes are not really for my taste, as you can't exactly shoot anyone in a text battle. And although it's usually frowned upon to feed or flip of someones verse Lil Bayly, there was no rule set up against that here, and you took full advantage of that, and made some good flips on Chase's verse.
I have to vote a tie on this, because both of you were pretty equal in every category. Neither really stood out enough to take the win, imo.
Nice battle though, and hope ye both keep it up!!