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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » May 19th, '07, 19:45

30-3 wrote:hey bar, sorry I haven't left feed on ya tracks

I've been on sum hardwork lol

I'll drop a nice breakdown for ya on sunday..

peace!


aight its kool man n thx :happy:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » May 20th, '07, 12:08

bump :8)
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Postby Phantom » May 20th, '07, 20:49

great cover bar
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » May 21st, '07, 09:59

^ lol yeh right :whistle:


Tracks Are Now Streamed On The Myspace, link added to first post

CHECK THEM!!! :whistle:
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Postby bg_pop » May 21st, '07, 19:12

I think TMW Presents: Bar - Welcome To The War Advance
is great
I want to hear the full album
10x bar
10x mart
for that you make one of the greatests songs :) 10x :worship: :worship: :worship:
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Postby B.A.D. » May 22nd, '07, 03:28

REVIEW

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DEMOLITION TIME (ft. Sajjad)
I didn't like the beat.... not my type in anyway... but anyways can't deny its a hot one... verse one is great.. lyrics r hot... hook sucks.... sajjad genious on this, loved the mixin, third verse is startin great... the lyrics r amazin, best verse on the track

YOU DON'T KNOW
beat is great.... I'm lovin it.... lyrics is great!!!, verse one is strong, n the mixin is amazin... gotta say again, lyrics r nice... hook is nice but nothin amazin haha... Verse 2 is nizeee, but sounds a lot like first....
nice track... liked this

YOU CAN'T BLAME ME
thats my kind of beat... my kind of track... i liked the slow paced rithm of this one... lyrics are 10/10.... gotta listen again to verse 1, I'm lovin that....
flow is extremme, nice.... Hook is amazing!!! damn.... this track is inpiring me damn!!!.... I love this track..... nice thang

LIVING THE LIFE (feat. Phantom)
:worship: :worship: :worship: str8 banguin, I've listened to this one before several times..... you've improved a whole lot... n u know its hard to Gild The Lily.... so propz!!... the beat is amazing!!!... propz to that too... hook is amazin.... fast n well flowed.... Whoa phantom verse is FYA!!!!....
nice track.... my favourite so far

HERE TO STAY (feat. ASP)
ol skul thang mayn!! chea!!!..... beat is powerfull... lovin that.... the flow is amazing!!!!.... u is great on this tracl..... hook is ok nuttin special, ASP.... great as always.... still gotta say I love the effect he adds to his voice...
I'm luvin this track.... propz

LIFE IS A FIGHT (feat. SK)
beat is nize!!!, nice verse, but nuttin special, flow is on point.. .thats a good thang.... hook is aite, but not my style def.... WTF???? what the fuck is that??.... what is he sayin??.... damn hahahaha..... nice track.... but I'm kinda mixed up eire.... hahahah.... nice track

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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » May 22nd, '07, 21:46

^ thanx for the review man, apreciate it :worship:
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Postby mart85 » May 23rd, '07, 15:08

thanks for the comments everybody :happy:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » May 26th, '07, 13:20

Bump :smoking:
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Postby IceAxe » May 26th, '07, 15:50

ok... i donwloaded this a while ago but forgot to feed :sweating:

but here it is now:

Demolition Time ft Sajjad

This is prrobably my favorite on this... I love the beat... Bar's first verse is great... Sajjad = greatness on this track... the third verse was good... better than the first.... Great Track :worship:

You Dont Know

nice beat... lyrics are good.. first verse is great... hook is allright... Verse 2 does sound a bit like the first, but it was good... another good track :worship:

You Cant Blame Me

I liked the slow pace on this....lyrics through out are great... great flow...... another track of greatness :worship:

Living the Life ft Phantom

.... I love this beat....hook is good.. i like the flow here....both you and Phantom did a great job on this :worship:

Here To Stay ft ASP

I like the way the beat sounds on this... bars's flow is good.... hook is alright, nothin amazing... ASP is great on this... got a good sound in his voice
Great shit, both of ya :worship:

Life is A Fight ft. SK

my fav. after Demo Time... great beat.... good flow and verse in the begining.... SK... Love your flow on this :worship:

it sounds like I was reapeatin myself in the review... had to say it was good too much..

Great job Mart and DC on the production, Good job to the featured artists... and Great Job Bar on all the tracks :worship:
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Re: TMW Presents: Bar - Welcome To The War Advance[Now streamed]

Postby ThomasAguanis » Jun 6th, '07, 01:52

finally listening to this now :sweating: not sure if tracks are in order:

demolition time: i think I left feed on this before. eh oh well.
1st verse was pretty nice. I think you could easily improve your flow on this. not sure how old this is now. lyrics were pretty nice too.
chorus: seemed a bit forced at points and sounded a bit repetitive but it was slightly catchy still.
2nd verse: Sajjad:
the effects could be better, doesn't sound good at parts with it but it's alright. you flow nicely and lyrics are decent too. I think I've heard better form you but can't really remember now.
3rd verse:
flow seems a bit fucked up at the beginning but you get back on track a few lines in. basically same feed as 1st verse although, to be honest, the lyrics were a bit hard to follow at points.

Life is a fight ft. SK:
1st verse: you seem to flow too fast on it but maybe it's just me. :sweating: your voice is a bit low at points too.
chorus:sounds good., i guess the voice added is sk, sounds creepy like a ghost or a bit Marlyn Manson sounding but it works.
verse 2: Sk
have no idea what you said, but the flow was sick. :y:
verse 3:
you seem more energetic. flow's slightly improved to my ears but it works on the beat. lyrics were pretty good too

Here to stay ft. ASP:
weird beat..but gets better as you hear it...kinda.
verse 1:
nice flow on this. lyrics seem to your normal standard, maybe flowed a bit off at times but as before, it may just be me.
chorus: eh it's alright. I don't like it much.
Verse 2: ASP
flows nice. lyrics are your normal complexness which we all seem to like. I don't really like the effect on your voice much though :sweating:
Verse 3:
best verse so far. sounds a bit weird on the "rhyme mind" part but still was good. flow seems better on this too.

You Can't Blame Me:
I like this beat. :y:
seems like it's gonna be good.
verse 1:
love this flow so far. the calmness is nice, different than the other energetic tracks but the softness is great to hear. lyrics are nice too :y:
chorus: def. my favorite so far.I really like it.
verse 2:
same as 1st verse but lyrics seem deeper. the "musical section" part seemed to be a bit off. other than that everything else was on point.
Verse 3:
same as 1st verse. pretty deep lyrics. I can def. relate to parts.

You Don't Know:
Chorus: eh I don;t like it much but it kinda works.
Verse 1:
flow's pretty fast. I'm not feeling it much but you got it down. lyrics seem to slip at parts and the effect at other parts could be improved.
Verse 2:
Hmm flow seems better on this kinda. it's slower which is good to me. lyrics were alright too.
Verse 3:
this flow seems good for the beat so far and lyrics seem like the best of the song.

Overall:
to be honest, I wasn't feeling it much :sweating: The beats seemed repetitive like similar types. My favorite track by far was you can't blame me. You seem to like flowing fast which is alright, I just don't like it much (if that matters). Also, you seem to force or try to hard with your lyrics, they just didn't seem right to me for some reason making me not enjoy them much. You need to work on pronouncing some words, but that's a common problem with everyone. You have great emotion and voice projection on your tracks, although your voice is hard to understand or goes to a different volume at points. I'm sure you can easily fix this the more you record and write. Keep it up man :y:
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Re: TMW Presents: Bar - Welcome To The War Advance[Now streamed]

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jun 6th, '07, 02:09

^ thanx man :worship: , yeh i been working on alot of stuff lately, i keep puting bits right here and bits wrong there, its frustrating as fuck but ill get it right sooner or later :p again thanx for the great feed man :worship:

@ ice axe - thanx man :worship:
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Re: TMW Presents: Bar - Welcome To The War Advance[Now streamed]

Postby bg_pop » Jun 6th, '07, 08:12

ThomasAguanis wrote:verse 2: Sk
have no idea what you said, but the flow was sick. :y:

30-3 wrote:LIFE IS A FIGHT (feat. SK)
what the fuck is that??.... what is he sayin??.... damn hahahaha..... nice track.... but I'm kinda mixed up eire.... hahahah.... nice track

Kez wrote:Life Is A Fight:
SK's flow is great too, but is it me or is he not rapping in English?

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Re: TMW Presents: Bar - Welcome To The War Advance[Now streamed]

Postby mart85 » Jun 6th, '07, 15:08

^^damn, that sounds pretty good :y: there are some parts that I don't really understand, but I get the message of most of the lines, and I like it :happy: could you post your lyrics in bulgarian please? I like to try to read the bulgarian lyrics while listening to your verses :happy:
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