Hadez & Tash8 vs StevetheTruth & Iceaxe [Lyrical Bat

[Tash8]

Hello,

We're trying some new stuff here:

This is not a regular battle, so don't treat it as one. It's a creative writing basically except it's battled out

You vote on these categories[They don't count if these are not used]:

FLOW: /15
STRUCTURE: /15
RHYMES: /10
MULTIES: /10
CHEMISTRY: /15
CONSISTENCY: /15
COMPLEXITY: /10
OTHERS [Enjoyment, Metaphors, Etc]: /10

You give these to the team and whoever has the highest points get a vote.

The subject will be posted after we agree on one..

Thanks,
Tash8

*EDIT, Steve drop your shit*

[JMG]

good idea

[Tash8]

yea i was tired of just regular battles

anyways, Subject is Music

[IceAxe]

wait, elaborate on the subject... is it our experiences in music/writing, or the role music's played in our lives, or the current music scene, etc?

Need more info on that before i write somethin

[Tash8]

we discussed this on MSN, it can be anything around the subject of Music and Lyrics, it has to do with it though.. like maybe music's feelings, and shit or how good you are. idk but something with music.

[Hadez]

The music flow through the veins of my flesh
The bluest of vessels, it remains in my chest
Too stupid to get it then you

[IceAxe]

ok... the topic was music... Tash mentioned we could write about how good we are.. so i did.

Feast you eyes upon this:

Once upon a time not long ago, a kid began to rhyme with the strong-est flow
his chimes are full of braun ya know, not yet in the prime, but it's like the spawn of Es-co

I cause upheaval yo, anyone better it's not pheas-able, my skills are unbelieveable
no pause I spit medieval no written letters more grievous-culled, i drill it inconcievable

he's impressive, posseses excesses of S's expresses finesse
in con-tests he com-presses, supresses agressors, contesters

my test-a-ments are blest-a-gainst dissents-and-dents with cement-con-tent
no one can crest-ma-vents it's ev-i-dent im hea-ven-sent the best to unspent extents

i can flip my intens-ity from nega-tive 50 to 1000 cent-i-grade inceasently
i spit with the sence-of-the omega's-id it's nifty i pound it, bend-ya-brain expressively


all uses of 2nd person words [you, your, etc] aren't dircted at Tash or Hadez, but rather the reader

any explinations can be requested

EDIT: it was pointed out to me that the flow may resemble that of Can-I-Bitch by Eminem... I just wanna state i've never heard this song or read the lyrics untill like 5 min. ago

[Hadez]

ok im bumpin this shit. steve you need to drop.

[stevethetruth]

sorry for the lateness

i took some shit i wrote a while ago and mixed it up a lil hope that ok?

The truth in the booth spraying ruthless shit, move it bitch
I lose it quick whatever mood I

[Tash8]

k vote

remember topic is Music

[Hadez]

vote





please

[Tash8]

thanks chet

glad someone votes, i'll make sure to vote on your shit

1-0 us

[Hadez]

man im glad somebody finally voted. thanks for the vote

1-0

[Tash8]

FLOW: tash n hadez 13/15 - steve n iceaxe 14/15
STRUCTURE: 12/15 - 14/15
RHYMES: 8/10 - 9/10
MULTIES: 7/10 - 9/10
CHEMISTRY: 14/15 - 12/15
CONSISTENCY: 14/15 - 12/15
COMPLEXITY: 8/10 - 9.5/10
OTHERS [Enjoyment, Metaphors, Etc]: 9/10 - 9/10

I ain't gonnna write the overall winners cause both were very good and cause i want y'allto read the ratings yourselves.and , yes, a little bit cause im lazy.

just wondering, cause i musta missed something, how did they win structure?

[IceAxe]

ok... if i read/added up blackhearts vote right....

its tied at 1-1