Shit Hits The Fan - Quick Verse

[Kez]

Found the beat and rapped an old verse on it
Just kept going until it stopped.

Here it is.

What you gonna do when shit hits the fan
(Are you gonna stand and fight like a man?)

Who's the guy you jip because it's funny? That's right it's me
You try to be hurting me but you guys are sleaze-
-balls for even attempting, i won't be an exception
To the way you treat people, i won't be an extention
A plug-in, that allows you to treat me like i'm dead an
Tie me to a pole by my tie, leave me in Trentham!
You don't upset me by calling me a freak, you're just bent an'
Maybe i should go deaf pull out my ears for Lent, shit!
Write this off as a plea for attention
You just don't like it because i speak with intent an'
I don't go away i'm like a flea that is left with
One wing and still escaping your reach, you can't get him!
I got this rap down to a tee, i'm bereft of
All the things you say is wrong with me, so it gets me
Pissed so shut it, i'm not pleased bitches yet it's
Not annoying to hear jips toward me and my friends, PRICKS!
Look how you made me act, a maniac
Go ahead and play this back, and see how my mates react
When i go all crazy wack like a fucking zany spack
Go on and just make me mad, i fuckin hate this crap!
Let's take it back, to somethin like Year 8 when i
Hated everyone who'd ask me my fuckin name (it's bad
When a kid like that tells you to just go away and that's
When he throws a fuckin fit) fuck you, you made me that
Way, we have forgotten the way we have
Treated me in the past, i spose you wanna enslave the past
Make it go and just escape from your brain in fast
Bouts so you dont gotta remember the pain your act-
-ions gave me man? Fuck you, i'm enraged and mad!
Your words? Motherfucker take 'em back!
At least say these things to my face! At last
I can see what you think, but what i fail to grasp
Is the reason you think this, does my face just hap-
-pen to do a fucked up eye when looking at you? Maybe that's
Why they do it, thats why i'm always on about gays and twats
In my ancient raps! (Ancient raps!)
I don't like to keep reminding you, inclining you
To do this shit again, but i have to say it, just rewind this through
This is the encore, explaining all these rhymes to you
Cause it makes it even clearer when they behind the few
Things i'm good at, ie rapping and rhyming too
Normally yes i would be filing through
(Beat stops)

[Mc Cubz]

tune man!! origional, you got a good bit of work to do regarding the interchange of words and clarity, which are still very good, once u get them to a top level, kinda like what maybe is getting at, I reckon you will be pretty nice, your tracks are sounding quite similar, which is fine cos it shows your real and probably always being yourself, I had the same,not problem, but more issue, I think your clarity has improved alot, as has your voice projection, its easier to hear what your saying, in that you force your words harder (key in rap) without it sounding to hard, maybe compress your pellas i duno, the beat isnt that great, so you did well to pull it off, getting back to what I was saying and not going around in more circles, I think your r eady to practise on some club tracks get a collab wid bar on one of them mad hook-type songs he makes, and then cum back to the type of concept your rapping about the last sort of 10 songs. ps ur mic sounds much better

ive tried to be honest and give you constructive criticism i hope it helps some and that some of whta ive said is tryue.

peace mate

[Kez]

Yeah i been trying to work on a new style but the fact that barely anybody was arsed pissed me off so i started trying to rush songs

I'm gonna spend more time on the stuff now

[Mc Cubz]

Yeah i been trying to work on a new style but the fact that barely anybody was arsed pissed me off so i started trying to rush songs

I'm gonna spend more time on the stuff now

I dont know whether you should rush songs but It seems to be working veryr well cos ur stil young jus keep up what your doing, while getting more clear sayin every word clearly and trying new flows and new conepts on a variety of beats!

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

tune man!! origional, you got a good bit of work to do regarding the interchange of words and clarity, which are still very good, once u get them to a top level, kinda like what maybe is getting at, I reckon you will be pretty nice, your tracks are sounding quite similar, which is fine cos it shows your real and probably always being yourself, I had the same,not problem, but more issue, I think your clarity has improved alot, as has your voice projection, its easier to hear what your saying, in that you force your words harder (key in rap) without it sounding to hard, maybe compress your pellas i duno, the beat isnt that great, so you did well to pull it off, getting back to what I was saying and not going around in more circles, I think your r eady to practise on some club tracks get a collab wid bar on one of them mad hook-type songs he makes, and then cum back to the type of concept your rapping about the last sort of 10 songs. ps ur mic sounds much better

ive tried to be honest and give you constructive criticism i hope it helps some and that some of whta ive said is tryue.

peace mate

lol, thx n all man but i couldnt do a hook for a club track to save my life, all that shake ya ass or bounce up n down club music aint my thing

[Xray]

you got nice lyrics and flow but ur tone of voice is too loud like wen i hear ur audios i gotta turn it real down cause the tone of ur voice just too loud so if you can make it alil lower you'll be good by the way your aca's dont sound original from the mic...do you edit ur aca's cause if you do your not editing them propely<<just a suggestion that you should work on

[DelinQuent]

i like the rhyming, lots of rhymes. lyric wise, just change a few lines, make your thoughts flow more clearly and you should be set. good job

[B.A.D.]

kez

[Kez]

you got nice lyrics and flow but ur tone of voice is too loud like wen i hear ur audios i gotta turn it real down cause the tone of ur voice just too loud so if you can make it alil lower you'll be good by the way your aca's dont sound original from the mic...do you edit ur aca's cause if you do your not editing them propely<<just a suggestion that you should work on

Sajjad

I don't give a fucking SHIT what you, of all people, think.

Fuck off, you prick.

Thanks to everyone else that fed

[AspirinE]

actually wat sajjad suggested was right on point, i like the lyrics the concepts but the mixing needs work, mixing makes songs enjoyable.


this track was pretty cool, just try mixing it better for once. Or send me an acapela, and ill show u how mixing and matching beat/acapela can do.

[Kez]

actually wat sajjad suggested was right on point, i like the lyrics the concepts but the mixing needs work, mixing makes songs enjoyable.


this track was pretty cool, just try mixing it better for once. Or send me an acapela, and ill show u how mixing and matching beat/acapela can do.

Yeah, well i don't feel like listening to that arsehole, so i'll take it into consideration but only cause you suggested it too

If you want yeah next time i'll send you the acapella (and beat as well?). You want the acapella completely unedited?

[AspirinE]

actually wat sajjad suggested was right on point, i like the lyrics the concepts but the mixing needs work, mixing makes songs enjoyable.


this track was pretty cool, just try mixing it better for once. Or send me an acapela, and ill show u how mixing and matching beat/acapela can do.

Yeah, well i don't feel like listening to that arsehole, so i'll take it into consideration but only cause you suggested it too

If you want yeah next time i'll send you the acapella (and beat as well?). You want the acapella completely unedited?

yeah, send me an unedited, acapela and beat, and ill try make ur quality better the same way i do with mine, ive had to do it a lot so i kind of have a few tricks up my sleave, plus i can show u how just the right amount of ambiance can do magic wen suiting a beat.

[mart85]

I agree with what cubz said... something I noticed too is that at some parts, you kinda rushed some words to make it flow, you should try to make it flow more naturally... other than that, it's pretty good, you're on the right path, keep practising

[Xray]

you got nice lyrics and flow but ur tone of voice is too loud like wen i hear ur audios i gotta turn it real down cause the tone of ur voice just too loud so if you can make it alil lower you'll be good by the way your aca's dont sound original from the mic...do you edit ur aca's cause if you do your not editing them propely<<just a suggestion that you should work on

Sajjad

I don't give a fucking SHIT what you, of all people, think.

Fuck off, you prick.

Thanks to everyone else that fed

damn ur one sad little kid btw why u acting so hard for ur a baby i seen ur myspace u look younger than my lil bro and you trynna act hard cause i told you that ur mixing needs to be worked on damn ur more G wannabe than kojack

[Kez]

you got nice lyrics and flow but ur tone of voice is too loud like wen i hear ur audios i gotta turn it real down cause the tone of ur voice just too loud so if you can make it alil lower you'll be good by the way your aca's dont sound original from the mic...do you edit ur aca's cause if you do your not editing them propely<<just a suggestion that you should work on

Sajjad

I don't give a fucking SHIT what you, of all people, think.

Fuck off, you prick.

Thanks to everyone else that fed

damn ur one sad little kid btw why u acting so hard for ur a baby i seen ur myspace u look younger than my lil bro and you trynna act hard cause i told you that ur mixing needs to be worked on damn ur more G wannabe than kojack

I'm not trying to act hard.
There's a difference between acting hard and knowing who's a prick.
I was wondering when you'd resort back to ageism as a weapon, it shows how much of a prick you are.
And i hate G Unit, so why don't you just shut the fuck up and piss off?