LW2: MC Wraith VS Massacre

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STRUCTURE
PUNCHES
MULTIES
RHYMES
VOCAB
COMPLEXITY
NAMEPLAY
OTHER( enjoyment ,metaphores , creativity anythin u can think off)

3 votes to win



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MC Wraith

its still day and i can see the massacre
this guys gay so get his ass-away

and this guys fake,hes the new michel jackson
he likes to get all oiled up an start jackin

massacre raps like hes kevin federline
he'll diss me usin a one ledder-rhyme


Massacre

yo, im the massacre who made this cat a wraith, showed him my wrath, ended in a blood bath
pussy tryna battle me, shit, all i can do is laugh, after readin my bars, yo shit is flat out daft

i rhyme crazy insane, somethin been set off in my brain, it turned me into a cynic
ill have you lookin more pathetic than bein called in at the free clinic

there aint no battle im not winnin, spittin complex bars that got you confused and spinnin
im grinnin at the fact that you at a lack of words like you went into arrest of the cardiac (word)


Explination

wraith, just so everyone knows means a ghost or evil spirit, pronounced rath

[Marth]

LOW : wraith, short normall lines
STRUCTURE : both
PUNCHES : Wraith
MULTIES Massacre
RHYMES Both
VOCAB Wraith
COMPLEXITY: Wraith
NAMEPLAY Wraith
OTHER( enjoyment ,metaphores , creativity anythin u can think off: Both where nice, and ehre enjoyeble to read

[IceAxe]

Flow: Tie*
Structure: tie
Punches: Wraith
Multis: massacre
Rhymes: Tie
Vocab: massacre
Complexity: massacre
Nameplay: massacre
Other: Tie


* because Wraith's short lines kinda lost it for me, Massacre;s long lines did the same

and "Wraith" is not pronounced like "(W)rath". it's Pronounced like "ray-th"...just thought I'd point that out.

[4D]

and "Wraith" is not pronounced like "(W)rath". it's Pronounced like "ray-th"...just thought I'd point that out.

Flow: Tie*
Structure: Wraith, simple but neater than Massacres
Punches: Wraith, but neither had any strong punches
Multis: Wraith , only just, both were pretty poor
Rhymes: Tie
Vocab: massacre
Complexity: massacre
Nameplay: massacre
Other: Massacre, for making an effort at complexity

Votes 6-5 to Massacre, close one, keep improving guys!

[C-Game]

2 - 1 masacare.. up for votes

[Enimee]

FLOW Wraith
STRUCTURE wraith
PUNCHES wraith
MULTIES none
RHYMES wraith
VOCABmass
COMPLEXITY mass
NAMEPLAY mass
OTHER mass

[C-Game]

last vote taken as a tie

so its 3 - 2 to mass