Easily Forgotten - (MIXED BY ASPIRINE)

[Kez]

First props to AspirinE for the mixing job, i didn't send him the overlays seperately but apart from that nothing else went wrong and he mixed it and it does sound way better so props to him.

Props to Thomas for telling me how to get the beat.

Kez - Easily Forgotten (Mixed by AspirinE)

Lyrics:

You know who this is don't try to deny it
Search ages for some good shit you finally find it
But you can't accept i'm good, it'd make you a hypocrit
You fake little prick you're shit, go jump unsafe from a bridge you prick!
If i fuck up while i'm doin this i'll gladly resign
From ever rapping again, fuckin bastards would like
That, but i got Big Ax-D, he knows the truth
Loosen up motherfuckers, take a toke or two
I want you to be calm i bought this dope for you
Maybe you'll stop examining my shit to make it broken through
Some kind of barrier, the sound barrier dove into
A cave so it didn't get split in half and blown to 2
Hundred pieces, that were scattered all over the world
But when you diss you reveal the pussy inside you, i know you're a girl!
So blow me and hurl and fuckin choke on it, (errr
That's disgusting) I know, it makes me want to go and just curl (into a ball...)

I'm easily forgotten when i'm beefin with someone an
Just revealin fuckin what i'm like the reasons that no-one does
Even like me, or even attempt to even fuckin bother
Cause i'm pissed off when you go "CHEESY BY KEZ LER TRON HEH!"
When people look at me they feel sure my eye twitched
Treat me like this you give me more to write bitch
When i was growing up i was taught to try and
Laugh at their insulting jokes the fucking whores and sly pricks
I feel always low, the floor is my pit
Each day i'm like "please make it so they fall tonight" shit
I have dreams of punching them breaking their skull and lying them
On the ground in the middle of the school at 9 and
I know i shouldnt of had these fuckin thoughts but i did
Maybe i need medication off that Shaw, where's my fix?!
And that aint even insulting that's just sayin what he thinks
At least he had the balls to fuckin say it, bloody dicks!
The rest of you, always talk behind my back!
Write shit about me, be sorry when i decide i haven't
Got to bother with you,it gets repetitive sometimes
Sometimes feels like i need a fucking sedetive sometimes
It's obvious you never should of said the shit, dumb guys
Like you even give a fuck about my mental state, fuck trying
To contain it, i rap about it, if you said that you don't like
This, how else will i remove the stress i get from life?!
Motherfucker..

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

real nice mixing job by asp


the thing about this is, its a very very very big beat to live up to, since tom used it for that track, and as you know tom completely ripped the shit

so automatically i compare it and there's very few artists on this site who could have lived up

but, the verses are 2 of your best, flow is great to me, lyrics are very good, delivery is nice, just keep doin what ya doin

[Tash8]

love it man, and the mix from asp was hot, gotta learn from him

[Kez]

real nice mixing job by asp


the thing about this is, its a very very very big beat to live up to, since tom used it for that track, and as you know tom completely ripped the shit

so automatically i compare it and there's very few artists on this site who could have lived up

but, the verses are 2 of your best, flow is great to me, lyrics are very good, delivery is nice, just keep doin what ya doin

I know, i was considering not releasing it but i thought i would anyway. I know few could outshine Thomas, and definately not me

But thanks Bar and Tash

[Kez]

God you ignorant bastards!

[Kez]

Yeah, i need to work on new concepts. I don't know what the fuck i'm doing posting the same kind of tracks to get more feed quicker.

I'll work on it a while before i post anything else here

[IceAxe]

Firstly, Asp did a good job on mixing this

At some points words seemed to kinda run together and it threw off the flow slightly, mostly in the first half of the first verse. But other than the times that happened, the overall flow was good.

The lyrics throughout are pretty good...

The second verse was better than the first on in terms of flow/delivery and, to me, lyrics. And I just liked it more.

[$0 R3@L]

I like it,asp's mixing helped you ALOT.He sorta kept the tracks flow just at a good pace.

It maybe wasnt the wisest thing to use a beat Tom's already blessed as its always bound to come out second best but you done your own thing with it and i sorta like it.

Imma echo what Killa is saying in that its maybe time to switch up the concepts.You recently put out a mixtape which mainly consisted of 'i hate you fucking haters' tracks throughout.Have one maybe two but now its becoming a standard type of concept for you...

Maybe experiment with more concepts to keep it fresh,like i told you before via msn your rapping is getting better and better...the flow and lyrics are showing progress,which is the main thing.

Keep em coming.

[B.A.D.]

first of all

this is what prooves how good mixin is

second

Kez... u is a young genious...

I'm loving this track.... its a really good thang to be bumpin
the lyrics are great, and the flow is well delivered

10/10

major propz

"That, but i got Big Ax-D, he knows the truth
Loosen up motherfuckers, take a toke or two"

[Kez]

Thanks Real, Ax, Maybe and Ice

[mart85]

like other people said, the fact that tom ripped that beat makes it harder to judge the song, but you really did well I think... you had good flow and lyrics, with nice multies... and the mixing helps a lot

good job on this, it was real nice ( I like that thumbs up smiley )

[DelinQuent]

that beat is sick. i haven't heard tom's version, so judging just you... i think you need to work on your flow a bit. look at the way the words fit together, rap isn't just rhyming. your words seem jerky together. keep working, not a bad track at all. good job.

[die2nite]

The beat is real laid back and all and I feel like the vocals are close but not quite fitting into the mood. The lyrics are simple but this seems like something heartfelt so it could be hard to make it real lyrical. This is one of the first songs I've heard you and my first basic impression is: You need more emotion, more *bang*. Nothing in this song makes me want to hear more tracks from you or listen to it over again (This isn't a diss, I will listen to more stuff you post). The whole track your voice remains at the same tone, try and switch it up.

[stevethetruth]

basically what maybe said i mean your pronuncation was good but sometimes the accent got hard to understand but yeah not that bad of a track man your improving and like killa said try to write bout different topics it might get you noticed more idk lol

keep em coming your improveing dude

[ThomasAguanis]

weird hearing you on this beat since I'm so used to hearing myself on it

1st verse:
flow is nice. lyrics are pretty sick too, as usual. you seem to have too many words in a line or go too fast a a few points but other than that it was good.
chorus: great singing haha

verse 2:
liking this better than the 1st so far. haha i love those voices you do, it adds a nice touch to your tracks. flow seems nice, haven't heard you slip yet.

overall:
your voice seems a bit low at points throughout so it's hard to understand. Maybe just work on pronunciation or voice projection, like mentioned above. Also, at others said, it wouldn't hurt to try new concepts now that you have mastered these kinds. I'm sure if you try you can start writing about anything (maybe pink kangaroos eating apple flavored cantaloupes? ) keep it up man, as others said, you're def. improving with each track and..pretty nice mixing asp


and it's weird reading other people's replies comparing it to my version, I guess I should thank those who did for that