LW2 : InWinsible vs 4word ( VOTE or Get the POX )

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FLOW
STRUCTURE
PUNCHES
MULTIES
RHYMES
VOCAB
COMPLEXITY
NAMEPLAY
OTHER( enjoyment ,metaphores , creativity anythin u can think off)

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InWINsible

you're talking about balls, but i have more nuts then a snicker
only 4 words needed to diss you you're a ass licker

that was even simpler then the words of bush while the iraque war
u wanna drive in chiraq's car, u wanna put your cock in a arse

u don't even know how to rhyme in syllebles, lirical miricel's
screaming like invinceble spirituals, my rhymes 'r critical and insubspinseble

4-word

I can't hear yur low rants u have no chance, win, yur a waste of time
u need 2 fight hard, u write bars, so I'll make yur face love mine

no doubt I, put ya outside, if all u can do is pout, hide, yous little
I slice and dice his life plans right, pussy learn how 2 lose civil cible

yur in danger, a slim stranger, will make ya brains burst, use ya thought process
in wins a momento like thin mints, they saw his text, said this loser fought draw next

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FLOW- tie - both weak
STRUCTURE- 4-word
PUNCHES- tie- both weak
MULTIES- 4word
RHYMES- 4word
VOCAB- inwinsible
COMPLEXITY- 4word
NAMEPLAY-none
OTHER- none

vote - 4-word

[4D]

ROFLMFAO

That first verse by InWinSible was funny as fuck, not brilliant on the rhyming, spelling and multies side, but funny the way thing were said, but funny doesn't win battles, well, not funny on it's own.

FLOW - InWinsible
STRUCTURE - 4-Word
PUNCHES - InWinsible
MULTIES - Tie, both had a few good ones
RHYMES - 4-Word, had more rhymes
VOCAB - InWinsible, For "chiracs car", even though insubspinseable is def not a word.
COMPLEXITY - 4-Word, had a more complex rhyme style, but lost him the flow cat.
NAMEPLAY - InWinsible, actually only one to use nameplay, in his second line.
Other - Inwinsible, was a little bit funny

Actually after reading these the first time, I thought 4-Word had won it, probably just because he had a tighter structure, and a more complex rhyme style. But after going through the cats, it seems I am wrong, and that InWinsible gets the votes.

With ties counting as 1 each, votes are 5-4 to InWinsible.

Both battlers need to improve for later rounds, but not awful bad either.

[MoBrat]

FLOW -- InWinsible
STRUCTURE -- 4-Word
PUNCHES -- InWinsible
MULTIES -- InWinsible
RHYMES -- 4-Word
VOCAB -- InWinsible
COMPLEXITY -- InWinsible
NAMEPLAY -- InWinsible
OTHER(enjoyment, metaphores, creativity) -- Inwinsible

OVERALL -- 7-2 InWinsible

[Big-T]

FLOW Inwinsable
STRUCTURE 4-word
PUNCHES inwisible
MULTIES 4-word
RHYMES 4-word
VOCAB 4-word
COMPLEXITY 4-word
NAMEPLAY inwisible
OTHER inwisible random and funny

4-word wins by 1

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4word wins 3-2


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