LW2: Torcher VS Invincible Punches(Battle Closed)

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FLOW
STRUCTURE
PUNCHES
MULTIES
RHYMES
VOCAB
COMPLEXITY
NAMEPLAY
OTHER( enjoyment ,metaphores , creativity anythin u can think off)

3 votes to win



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Torcher

My lava flows and magma prose are smashin' pro's in the nose like trainers askin Lassie to stay,
Cos this dawg can't match me t'day, this geek comes with weak punches and acting Cassias Clay,

MY classy displays practically slay, while IP's romantically gay, to me he posted some-queer haiku's
The visual imagery could scare sky news, And if today I lose, then the voters didn't compare I.Q's

I share my views with Freud and Einstein, I`m employing rhyme styles that can destroy a skyline,
This miniscule bitch'is givin me invisible pinches, but this rap gnat can't even annoy a fine-rhyme.

Invincible Punches

imma wreck this coward, spittin fire, ill devour him
the only torch here is my mouth, pussy bitch i overpower him

i cant be stopped, invincible punches getchu socked in ya knock
while i pop off on ya block, fuck sticks and stones, witchu, i use a rock

its personal faggot, you aint never gonna beat me, please
you got a better chance of gettin a dyke on her knees

[MoBrat]

FLOW Torcher [just read it out loud and you'll see what i mean]
STRUCTURE Torcher [more organised, easier to undertsand]
PUNCHES Torcher [nuff' said]
MULTIES Torcher [Torcher had a lot more multies than invisible punches]
RHYMES Torcher [it had a alot of rhymes which made it poetic]
VOCAB Torcher [more complex vobac for sure]
COMPLEXITY Torcher [the structure was complex and better organised]
NAMEPLAY Torcher
OTHER Torcher [I enjoyed it way more]

I think it's clear who my vote goes to.

i agree torcher in all cats this was murder no matter what way i looked at it...if i need 2 break it down i will

[IceAxe]

FLOW Torcher
STRUCTURE Torcher
PUNCHES Torcher
MULTIES Torcher
RHYMES Torcher
VOCAB Torcher
COMPLEXITY Torcher
NAMEPLAY Torcher
OTHER Torcher

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torcher wins 3-0 ko

voting closed