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New verse. -end up dead-

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New verse. -end up dead-

Postby codyp » Jun 5th, '07, 05:10

eh just recorded it.
Im not too sure if I like it.
Songs called end up dead.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/21459109656b46/
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Re: New verse. -end up dead-

Postby Tash8 » Jun 5th, '07, 21:00

nice flow

pretty good track
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Re: New verse. -end up dead-

Postby J Roc » Jun 5th, '07, 21:37

the flows aight but the song cuts off in the midle.
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Re: New verse. -end up dead-

Postby codyp » Jun 5th, '07, 23:25

J roc wrote:the flows aight but the song cuts off in the midle.


Well yeah its just the first verse.


I redid some of it cuz I didn't like it.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/21569031bad531/
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Re: New verse. -end up dead-

Postby ThomasAguanis » Jun 6th, '07, 00:29

listening now to the 2nd link:

I don't like the singing much :sweating:
flow is alright.could be better but now it seems it fits the beat very nicely as it goes on.
some lines are a bit too long it seems and it messed up the flow once or twice. lyrics are decent, story in them kinda makes up for it. yeah thew singing isn't my favorite, sounds a bit overdone to me :sweating:
the beat was pretty cool, seemed to sound better as it looped more. your voice sounded a bit low but that may have been my speakers and emotion seemed alright although a bit more wouldn't have hurt the track. keep it up man. it was still a pretty good track :y:
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Re: New verse. -end up dead-

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Jun 6th, '07, 00:35

nice flow on it,,listen now to the 2nd version
and i feelin the singin..lol...funny :flower:
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Re: New verse. -end up dead-

Postby codyp » Jun 6th, '07, 01:10

Haha thanks guys,

The singing is kinda something weird I do.

And yeah there are some mess up part I want to fix if I get unlazy.

As for the beat, I made it from a classical song but added some twists.
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