listening now to the 2nd link:
I don't like the singing much
flow is alright.could be better but now it seems it fits the beat very nicely as it goes on.
some lines are a bit too long it seems and it messed up the flow once or twice. lyrics are decent, story in them kinda makes up for it. yeah thew singing isn't my favorite, sounds a bit overdone to me
the beat was pretty cool, seemed to sound better as it looped more. your voice sounded a bit low but that may have been my speakers and emotion seemed alright although a bit more wouldn't have hurt the track. keep it up man. it was still a pretty good track
