J roc vs Beardhomestead (Skrew it, J roc wins)

[beardhomestead]

This is 3 rounds so no one vote after one or two, k? and it's 6 lines per person per round.

You want rocks, fucking crack fiend
I got some in my pocket, get on your knees and please
If you do good enough you might get one from me
Damn, you aint even doin this for rocks,
You just doin this shit cuz you love to suck some cock
So go away, stop trying to fuck with Paradox

[J Roc]

homestead?wtf is that supposed to mean?your about as witty as mr.bean
i dont suck-cock,fuck-talk,pull out my hand gun and kill you on the spot
leave you shot alot and you beg me for peace,put my gun to your face an shoot out your teeth
you aint gotta dick,your a chick,and u suck lil boys for-fun,i think your a hor,son
yo ill be like cartman and youll eat your parents,lil boy scout ill take you merits
steal your whole fuckin house and you live in a box,boy you'll be the one suckin cocks

round 2

[beardhomestead]

You're shits a joke, I'm done with the gay jokes, ok bloke?
Stop making empty threats, you even got a gat? yeah I bet
I'll cut you to pieces, grill ya and eat ya, that kinda peace, huh?
You probly think I'm playing, I aint, I'm a crazy ass motherfucker who kills saints.
Say to eat my parents, mabye I will, they'll sit right next to you on the grill
Call me a boy scout, you girl scout, don't pout, I know what your all about, just get the fuck out

[J Roc]

fuck?you cant kill me,youll never grill-me,so just pop another pill,G
kill saints cause they wont fight-back,quit the game dawg cause you write-wack
theres no empty threats here,i went to hell and left your pets-there
you only crazy when you fuckin wita girl-scout,your styles a typhoon,it just swirls-out
when i ever make a gay-joke?thats your way-loke,just be you and stay-broke
i aint stallin,shit im fuckin ballin~,i gotta go dawg,its your girl friend callin

[beardhomestead]

Bitch, you don't know me, you can't expose me, homie
I pop pills, cuz my therapist says she thinks I might kill those that aint ill
I aint crazy? I'm fucking zany, gimme a meat cleaver and we'll see
I'm like Dante in hell, I go there and chill, I pet my dog and you run away before you get killed
I kill saints cuz I'm nuts, blow up the church by the ruts, fuck with me, and you get cut up
Girlfriend? Only one who I gave your number is my gay homie, I think he's the one that called, g

EDIT: I asked to change my name on the forums to Paradox, you can call me either one for here, just to let ya know

[J Roc]

fight me?youd rather do crystal meth,ill lead you to an easy death
you can burn chruches but you got urges to fuck guy surgiens
you real crazy?you cant fase-me,your rhymes suck cause your lazy
you aint no blood or crip,you just a poser thats gone prick,
you only made a broken-diss,now you can choke-on-this
i should hang u for upin yourself,why you keep fuckin yourself?

sorry i took so long man

[J Roc]

bump,can some people get in on this?

[Tash8]

Round 1:
Flow - Both were terrible, none
Structure - Terrible, so neither got it
Rhymes - J-roc
Multis - J-roc
Punches - J-roc
Nameplay - J-roc terrible nameplays but j-row mentions him atleast
Complexity - None both simple
Other - didn't really enjoy either but J-roc gets it for his metaphore/similie

Round 2:
Flow - BH but both were bad
Structure - both were bad
Rhymes - BH, cause J-roc bascially used half of the rhymes BH used
Multis - J-roc but your using them wrong
Punches - J-roc, best punch of the round [i gotta go dawg,its your girl friend callin]
Complexity - none
Other - J-roc's last line won this for me

Round 3:
Flow - J-roc
Structure - J-roc, the structure is getting better by round
Rhymes - J-roc, BH rhyming g with homie is terrible, it hardly rhymes unless you stress mie in homie
Multis - J-roc
Punches - none, j-roc didn't really attack he just defended himself so it's no one
Complexity - none
Other - none

Overall - J-roc

and i'll let you guys know now, don't do this again no on'es gonna vote for it.. it's 36 lines to read, that's a lot so just don't do it again


BH your getting better but really read the effin tutorial 4d posted.

[beardhomestead]

Ok, J roc, lets just say you won, I think he's right and that no one else is gonna respond

[J Roc]

thanks for votin/readin tash,ill watch my structure more

and ill take that win beard,good battle funest one for me so far

[4D]

Fucks sake, have a bit of patience, the battle's only been up a day, you might get some votes yet.


*Runs before feeling pressured to read all the lines*


Lol, i`m only messing, haven't time to feed right now, i might post a verdict tomorrow, got work in a minute.