LW2: Onslought VS Phantom(Vote Now!)

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RHYMES
VOCAB
COMPLEXITY
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OTHER( enjoyment ,metaphores , creativity anythin u can think off)

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Onslought

the onslought i brought turned this bitch from reality to a phantom, ficticious
wicked, the shit I spits ridiculous, you cant stick wit this, droppin hits wit this

ill slice ya achilles, make you fall to ya knees, have you beggin me for mercy please
dont take my life slought, but this is what i sought, tie your vocal chords in a knot

then leave you in my closet to rot, we all got skeletons in our closet but i got a skull
i just made your battle null, now you know, this is the price of battlin me paid in full


Phantom

I brought you my thoughts to slaughter whatever-ya-got to enter-Onslaught, now-suffer
cuz it's gonna be another tough spot my brother, one of us better-be-dropped down-under

my job is to connect-all-the-dots and solve what is not uncovered yet-in-it's-plot because
you're the subject-in-my-log, I'm ready-to-rot your actions-you-jot, I'm acceptin-this-slot

I'm rejectin-what's-tossed cuz never-a-loss I'm possessin-because lesser-in-flaws I confess in my profession
I am called-the-Phantom,-come-cross paths with me, I saw I-could-mash-you as if you are soft-apple-sauce MC

[C-Game]

smh

some one vote SO WE CAN FUCKIN start ROUND 2
this is da last battle god damn it

[4D]

FLOW - Onslaught
STRUCTURE - Onslaught
PUNCHES - Onslaught
MULTIES - Phantom
RHYMES - Phantom
VOCAB - Phantom
COMPLEXITY - Phantom
NAMEPLAY - Tie, both had one line of nameplay, but both pretty average
OTHER - Onslaught

Mine actually adds up as 5-5 too, but i`m gonna give the vote to Onslaught, because I enjoyed his a bit better. I usually enjoy the more complex rhymes better, but even though Phantom got those complex cats, it wasn't really special either. So i've gone for Onslaught, because I liked his last punch a lot, and enjoyed his verse a bit more.

[MoBrat]

FLOW -- Onslought
STRUCTURE -- Onslought
PUNCHES -- Onslought
MULTIES -- Phantom
RHYMES -- Phantom
VOCAB -- Phantom
COMPLEXITY -- Phantom
NAMEPLAY -- Onslought
OTHER(enjoyment,metaphores, creativity) -- Onslought

OVERALL -- 5-4 Onslought