IT WASNT THAT CLOSE OF A BATTLE ia U WIN
yeh exactly ice wins period
IT WASNT THAT CLOSE OF A BATTLE ia U WIN
4D wrote:Yeah, IceAxe definitely got this one, even though one or two multies seemed a little forced (Like the multi you rhymed with "be-he-moth", didn't roll off the tongue very well, the "heat/death" part is awkward), but I enjoyed you're vocabulary, using behemoth and leviathan was very cool, nice multies matching up with leviathan, you've improved a lot man. And, to Global, not awful bad either man, just a bit too simplistic and basic, to acheiev any votes really. Your structure is nice for poetry, but for making punches in a battle, and fitting in with the bars/lines restrictions, it dosn't work. But, keep practicing man, and you'll be fine.
P.s @ C-Game, I love the way you capitalise everything in the sentence except what you should've, the persons name, weird English.
C-Game wrote:anyway next tourney must consider this a new way of doin
the C-Game way
4D wrote:C-Game wrote:anyway next tourney must consider this a new way of doin
the C-Game way
YEAH, I`M ALL FOR INTEGRATING THAT STYLE UP IN THIS BITCH, LET'S DO IT c-g, YOU THA MAN.
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