Untouchablez(Pik And DQ)Fuckin With me UPDATEDnew chorus...

[DelinQuent]

new chours, new beat, verses rerecorded to match the mood of the beat... gimme some feedback kids.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInf ... ID=5423193

[Call Me Pik]

yeah to me this song is epic now sounds alot better then b4 tah my ears whut u guys think? feed

[mart85]

tight song... to be honest, I thought the hook was missing just a little something... it was good, but it wasn't awesome to me, it was missing a little something I think, but I don't know what lol

and the 1st verse vice was good, again not awesome but good... but after that it started to get a lot better IMO... call me pik, the second verse was sick, I liked the flow/delivery it was really nice... and the 3rd verse was sick too, it was much better than the first verse I thought, DQ, you seemed to have more energy or something, and it was great... overall it's a real great track guys, good job I liked it

(by the way, I think the chorus before the last verse was slightly off... it should be "moved to the right" cause it came in a little too early, at least that's what I thought )

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

i liked the chorus.....but the volume of the chorus kinda fucked it up maybe its just my speaker...beat is sick...
and call me prik was awesome on it....and DQ good verse man yea ur 3rd verse was better than the 1st

[$0 R3@L]

good track man,i actually prefer the original but i prefer the hook on this version.

Anyway good job guys,i enjoyed it

[Call Me Pik]

thnks for the feed we'll try to fix all the problems with it so we can put it out on Immunity - the demo i might try tah get u a track list of all the songs we kud put on cd and let u decide which ones should go on....anyway we'll try to fix the volume of the hook and try to find out whuts missing also move the last hook back a lil...if dq wants tah put more into the first verse weel try that 2 feed is appreciated since it was hard to depict because its not the original thnks again

[randomghost]

hot track guys...i heard that beats some where before lol....both of ya nice flow and delivery

[B.A.D.]

damn u gots a nice track eire

good beat choice 4 the track

lemme bump this 4 ya

[DelinQuent]

it's a rapitfly beat, maybe that's where you heard it. thanks for all the feed.

[HAYZI]

top track guys i didint hear the first version but i love this, the chorus after the second verse is way out tho u gota fix that

[DelinQuent]

thanks for all the feedback. i'll make sure i fix all those problems. bump