well first nice mixing sajjad
I like the chorus, I thought it was the best part of the song, to me at least... it was catchy
Tash: like the others said, the thing you did with your voice, it didn't work for me sorry, but you gotta try things sometimes, so there's nothing wrong with that, don't be afraid to experiment

the rest was good, just what you did with your voice that I didn't really like

chris: getting better, you have good flow, you need a little more emotion in your voice but just keep practising and you'll get better... something you should try, to get a little more emotion in your voice, (and if you're home alone maybe lol), is to put the beat at a real loud volume, so that you can barely hear you, and practise your verse until you got it right lol... then when you'll go and record your verse with the beat at a regular volume it'll probably be easier, and there should be more emotion in your voice
keep it up guys
