typin while listen...
kool feel to it... lol...u really improve ur "diffrent style" hehe...
nice beat also...propz to mart...
good job
thx man, appreciate it
yeah, personally I really like the track, your lyrics are real good and deep, but I listened to it yesterday in my mp3 player, and I think what is not perfect with the song is the aggressive parts, maybe they would have to be a little less aggressive ... I didn't realize it at first, when mixing the song, but now after like a month or 2, I think that's what should be different... especially the first few lines of the aggressive parts, to have a "smoother" transition maybe... but still, I like the track and like you said, you have to try new things, that's the best way you can improve
yeh im the same i aint sure about it, i wasnt sure about all the new stuff i was trying thats why im realeasing it all lol, n thx man
Wow The beat is great good job mart
About the verses yeah I think you must be more agresive
:)
But I like it But I think here it is the same problem with the breath I think you should work more when you make verses.I mean Repeat the verse about 30 or 40 times like me and you will understand where you must stop and star again but I like your flow
The song is deep
:):)and i like this type of songs
thx man, appreciate it
listening now.
i like this beat. really good feel to it you flow nicely on this. When the beat changes a bit it sounds like you're shouting. the interlude was good. lyrics are pretty sick. this time when the beat changes a bit you don't shout as much which was better. again, interlude was good, it adds a different element to the track and works really well. flow's still good on the beat and lyrics are up to par with previous verses.nice song man. keep it up
thanx man
nice beat.... just the perfect lay back n smoke sum type
the first verse is kool!, I like the flow its kinda diferent, but good
hook wuz not my style
the first interlude is good, nice diferent twist u got there
verse 2 is great, and you fit perfectly on the beat change
interlude 2 goes deeper, its a nice thing to listen about how you express with music... nice
verse 3 has a tired feelig on it, but fixes up fast, good lyrics although It feels like shorter
good track mayn... lovin it! 10/10
thanx man, appreciate it
I really like this. The beat is amazing and you flow well on it. Lyrics are amazing. You managed to put quite a few multies into a personal-type song which is impressive. I like the interludes instead of choruses as well although I feel the first interlude was too long. Maybe it was just me but I didn't even notice the aggressiveness. I can tell something changed, but it doesn't sound aggressive to me. But I like it. Props on this, it's deep and a good story.
thanx man, im glad you noticed with the multi's, just when i was writing this track i remember trying to fit them in but keep a very strong story/meaning, something i havent did to well in the past, thanx for checking man, appreciate it
... I didn't realize it at first, when mixing the song, but now after like a month or 2, I think that's what should be different... especially the first few lines of the aggressive parts, to have a "smoother" transition maybe... but still, I like the track and like you said, you have to try new things, that's the best way you can improve 
...lovin the track man..i repeated 4 times now 
