[SSquared] - Does God Hate Me?

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I tried a couple extremely different things with this song. First off the content: I was high when I wrote this, hence the chorus and first 8 lines of the first verse. After that though the entire song goes political. I think I'll post the lyrics so you guys can see what I'm saying. Secondly the recording: The chorus I just tried to make my voice as raspy as possible, going for a little DMX almost, I think it worked though. As well, this is the first time of all my recording where I set my mic to record 10 DB less and I just put my mouth right up to the mic and yelled and put all my emotion into it. I also think this worked.

Anyways enough talking, here's the song:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/22861611f3c625/

Lyrics:

[Chorus]
Does god hate me, because I tried to slay a baby
Raped the first lady, and they say I may be crazy
This bag got an r-rating, I think this cannabis played me
Look at what this fuckin shits got me saying
Does god hate me, because I tried to slay a baby
Raped the first lady, and they say I may be crazy
This bag got an r-rating, I think this cannabis played me
Look at what this fuckin shits got me saying

And now everything

[$0 R3@L]

Love your delievery.

the hooks ill but add damn overlays! overwise it sounds flat.

The verses are ill,really enjoyed the multi use and flow

my fav track of yours so far.

Great job bro.

9/10

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

kool track....enjoyed it...
seemed like u swallowed some words ...dunno just me
but kool voice aswell delievery...and the hook is strong
and like so real said....add overlays
keep it up

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sorry for being awkward, but can you upload on somehting else (sendspace preferebly) i read the lyrics n i wanne listen, but zshare doesnt work for me coz i accidently removed windows media from my computer, and when i click on the link i have to click download file really fast before it tries to buffer the track or else its closes my internet explorer, and ive tried 4 times with the track but it keeps buffering quick and i cant get to the donwload page

[$0 R3@L]

sorry for being awkward, but can you upload on somehting else (sendspace preferebly) i read the lyrics n i wanne listen, but zshare doesnt work for me coz i accidently removed windows media from my computer, and when i click on the link i have to click download file really fast before it tries to buffer the track or else its closes my internet explorer, and ive tried 4 times with the track but it keeps buffering quick and i cant get to the donwload page

http://www.microsoft.com/windows/window ... fault.aspx

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

sorry for being awkward, but can you upload on somehting else (sendspace preferebly) i read the lyrics n i wanne listen, but zshare doesnt work for me coz i accidently removed windows media from my computer, and when i click on the link i have to click download file really fast before it tries to buffer the track or else its closes my internet explorer, and ive tried 4 times with the track but it keeps buffering quick and i cant get to the donwload page

http://www.microsoft.com/windows/window ... fault.aspx

props man

*shows how lazy i am* lol


ill feed in bout 15 min

[die2nite]

Love your delievery.

the hooks ill but add damn overlays! overwise it sounds flat.

The verses are ill,really enjoyed the multi use and flow

my fav track of yours so far.

Great job bro.

9/10

Thanks man. Glad ya like it.

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[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

Love your delievery.

the hooks ill but add damn overlays! overwise it sounds flat.

The verses are ill,really enjoyed the multi use and flow

my fav track of yours so far.

Great job bro.

9/10

Thanks man. Glad ya like it.

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[AspirinE]

I like it man,

Not a fan of the hook though, a bit edgy with the different voices. Lyrics , Flow , decent quality too

Dont got much more to add. id give it 7/10 coz ive heard better from ya.