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LW2: MC Fast Cummer Vs Blow & Swallow [VOTE]

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LW2: MC Fast Cummer Vs Blow & Swallow [VOTE]

Postby Tash8 » Jun 14th, '07, 20:15

Post count 30 + AND
Registered on or before April 15th 2007
Or must be a participant in the tourney
Simple votes like I vote X is not accpeted

must give a brief description on why u voted him

OR/AND

vote on ALL/ SOME of these categories

FLOW
STRUCTURE
PUNCHES
MULTIES
RHYMES
VOCAB
COMPLEXITY
NAMEPLAY
OTHER( enjoyment ,metaphores , creativity anythin u can think off)

3 votes to win



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MC Fast Cummer
I`m comin' fast with stunnin' raps, but when it comes to spunkin' fast I`m cummin last,
While you're gulpin' back busted nads, I got your mum 'n dad in my adult seduction class.
You're a disgustin fag and whimsical birdbrain, my rhymes inflict critical nerve pain,
If blowin' G.O.A.Ts floats ur boat, I`ll coat ur throat with da most lyrical sperm stains
What a pitiful pervs name, my flow'll show Blow 'n Swallow that there's no-ta-morrow,
He's a robin red breast and blowin swallows, while pro's follow my prose and wallow.


exp:
Whimsical: given to whimsy or fanciful notions; capricious: a pixyish, whimsical fellow
G.O.A.T - Greatest Of All Time
wallow - to live self-indulgently; luxuriate; revel: to wallow in luxury;

Blow and Swallow
my fierce words pierce like swords, they're designed to shine and define-the-context,
too perplex to be just plaintext, raw complex-ity leavin you in awe, let me underline-the-pretext
mc fast cummer tryin to make it last longer, i swallow the blow like your flow, now you feel the pain blister
you stutter & slip over my syllabyles, you heart flutters & flips as i assemble the next brain-twister
i'm the author of these metaphores, sucked into your core by you pores, makin' you feel sore
i implore gore to settle the score, if you roar for more i'mma stop to snore
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Re: LW2: MC Fast Cummer Vs Blow & Swallow [VOTE]

Postby Big-T » Jun 15th, '07, 21:01

MFC=MC Fast Cummer
BS=Blow & Swallow

FLOW MFC
STRUCTURE MFC
PUNCHES MFC
MULTIES BS
RHYMES MFC
VOCAB BS
COMPLEXITY BS
NAMEPLAY DRAW
OTHER MFC just about took it

MFC 6 - 4 BS

Good battle
Clones are people two.
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Re: LW2: MC Fast Cummer Vs Blow & Swallow [VOTE]

Postby IceAxe » Jun 15th, '07, 22:05

Flow: Fast Cummer
Structure: Fast Cummer
Punches:Tie
Rhymes: Blow and swallow
Multis: Fast cummer - i felt his were better quality
Vocab: Tie
Nameplay: Tie
Complexity: blow and swallow
Other: Fast cummer - i liked the "Blowin G.O.A.T.s" line (i never hope i have to say that again :sweating: ) and his first line the most

7-5 to fast Cummer
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Re: LW2: MC Fast Cummer Vs Blow & Swallow [VOTE]

Postby shady_aftermathzz » Jun 15th, '07, 23:27

FLOW---- mfc
STRUCTURE---- mfc
PUNCHES bs
MULTIES---bs
RHYMES-----mfc
VOCAB BS-----tie
COMPLEXITY ----bs
OTHER-----------bs

BS gets my vote, needs to work more on structure
mfc u wasnt bad, i was feeling it for real

overall, a good battle, keep up the good work
In the event of my Demise ---- Tupac

In the Event of My Demise
when my heart can beat no more
I Hope I Die For A Principle
or A Belief that I had Lived 4
I will die Before My Time
Because I feel the shadow's Depth
so much I wanted 2 accomplish
before I reached my Death
I have come 2 grips with the possibility
and wiped the last tear from My eyes
I Loved All who were Positive
In the event of my Demise





thanks to sinemm
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Re: LW2: MC Fast Cummer Vs Blow & Swallow [VOTE]

Postby J Roc » Jun 16th, '07, 00:23

FLOW :fast cummer
STRUCTURE:fast cummer
PUNCHES:fast cummer
MULTIES :fast cummer
RHYMES :blow and swallow
VOCAB :blow and swallow
COMPLEXITY: fast cummer
NAMEPLAY :tie
OTHER( enjoyment ,metaphores , creativity anythin u can think off):fast cummer

7/3-fast cummer was nice here,blow and swallow had a good battle to,but i thought fast cummer beat him in most sections.
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Re: LW2: MC Fast Cummer Vs Blow & Swallow [VOTE]

Postby C-Game » Jun 16th, '07, 18:34

shady_aftermathzz wrote:FLOW---- mfc
STRUCTURE---- mfc
PUNCHES bs
MULTIES---bs
RHYMES-----mfc
VOCAB BS-----tie
COMPLEXITY ----bs
OTHER-----------bs

BS gets my vote, needs to work more on structure
mfc u wasnt bad, i was feeling it for real

overall, a good battle, keep up the good work



sorry shady... vote cannot be accepted coz u have registerred recently and not even a tourney participant..

u can vote on da other none LW2 battles though :y:

good to c u votin...
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