J roc vs tash(tash wins)

[J Roc]

ok,3 bars and ill drop first.tash will drop ina few days apparently.no feedin/flippin.

[J Roc]

i slash-and-kill,tash-is-ill cause he does hash-and-pills
ur shits-wack,just sit-back,and look fucked like dafadils

is he a chick-or-a-dude?u wont see a dick-when-hes-nude
he always quits-when-hes-sued,and always quick-to-be-rude

just tell me where tash-is,and ill burn him to ashes
if he ever flashes,yall will know where his rash-is

no hate

[Tash8]

yo, it's time to clock this bitch, in a zip-loc, and have his dick-locked
in a string pick-lock, and have his chick-knocked, with my thick-cock

japanese-roc i squeeze-and-knock till he bleeds-a-lot, crashes into a
pleading-shock he pleads-to-stop indeed i proceed to succeed-to-top

o Canada, our tomb and satan-land, true patriots but it's fake-n-bland
from see-to-see, i'll be makin' you pee-and-plea, when your seein-me


3rd line: japanese roc, i googled j-roc and first thing that came up was japanese rock

5th line: it's a diss for the candian anthem

O Canada! Our home and native land!
True patriot love in all thy sons command.

he's from canada if you couldn't figure that out

6th line: sea to sea, is the canadian moto, changed it to see to see cuz when he see me, i make him plea..


my shit sucks :laughing"

[IceAxe]

Not breakin down into cats, but i shall explain

Tash and j roc had equal multis and rhymes from my perspective. Tash went more personal with the Canadian anthem thing, and his structure was better. i enjoyed J rocs drop more overall. the vocab from both were simple, so it's tied there.

so addin up its....5-4 Tash, close battle

[Tash8]

thanks 1-0 "D

[4D]

I`m on almost the same page as Ice-Axe, although I think Tash took it on multies, rhymes, complexity, vocab, and Nameplay. But, I also really enjoyed J-Roc's drop, the punches were funnier than Tash's, and he had soem very nice multies and rhymes.

This was a close battle, but Tash just nicked it in my opinion.

[J Roc]

eh,thanks for votin,

2-0-tash

[shady_aftermathzz]

its hard to decide coz' both showed equal skills in there, both were kinda' funny, simple yet a good battle, so i aint breaking it down n' i really cant decide who got it...so its a tied battle for me, re-match would be great/
j roc and tash both get 1 pt each from me, count it or not

peace

[4D]

I think you're a little too new to the section man, to be voting on the battles. You need to at least get a few battles under your belt, and start to understand the categories and different areas you should be analysing.

I read your rhyme in Creative writing, and it's typical of someone starting off and finding their rhyme skills. It's not bad, but it's obvious you have yet to learn how to construct a verse, to write complicated rhyme styles and make it complex while still applying punches. There's an art to it, and it takes a while and a lot of practice to learn how to do it.

You need to understand these things to vote properly on the battles, imo. It's up to the battlers and C-Game though.

[shady_aftermathzz]

I think you're a little too new to the section man, to be voting on the battles. You need to at least get a few battles under your belt, and start to understand the categories and different areas you should be analysing.

I read your rhyme in Creative writing, and it's typical of someone starting off and finding their rhyme skills. It's not bad, but it's obvious you have yet to learn how to construct a verse, to write complicated rhyme styles and make it complex while still applying punches. There's an art to it, and it takes a while and a lot of practice to learn how to do it.

You need to understand these things to vote properly on the battles, imo. It's up to the battlers and C-Game though.

got cha but there aint nothing wrong with me voting as far as im concerned...anyone who knows a lil' about battles (and its a text battle man*), all u do is read'em and vote for the person whoze lines u felt more, its a lot more different in spitting and typing some shit up...i know texts help improve your skills esp multies/ what im doing there is just reading'em/ no hate or beefs man but i be just saying; and then again like u said its upto c-game or the battlers n' i did say COUNT IT OR NOT already/ neway, didnt know about it, thanks for pointing to it/ ma bad ppl' /
peace

[Tash8]

yea still 2-0, u need to have 50 posts


btw j-roc, i was talking to ice yesterday and i was saying you made a huge leap... your really getting better keep it up ...

[4D]

got cha but there aint nothing wrong with me voting as far as im concerned...anyone who knows a lil' about battles (and its a text battle man*), all u do is read'em and vote for the person whoze lines u felt more, its a lot more different in spitting and typing some shit up...i know texts help improve your skills esp multies/ what im doing there is just reading'em/ no hate or beefs man but i be just saying; and then again like u said its upto c-game or the battlers n' i did say COUNT IT OR NOT already/ neway, didnt know about it, thanks for pointing to it/ ma bad ppl' /
peace

I know you think there's nothing wrong with it man, but more experienced voters don't just read em and vote for whoever they were feeling more, because that's not fair to the person who was technically better. The way you're saying it is that someone can be possibly crap at rhyming, but have some kick-ass funny jokes, and win the reader with some great humour. See, this is why there are categories, there are many elements to a rap verse, and all of them need to be addressed. I agree, this is a text battle, but only strengthens my case. This isn't a stage in front of a drunken audience, you can't get away with a few funny personal insults or punches. Because your lyrics are under a fine tooth comb, you gotta be better lyrically as well as coming with strong punches.

btw j-roc, i was talking to ice yesterday and i was saying you made a huge leap... your really getting better keep it up ...

Yeah, I was pleasantly surprised, came out very hard with some funny punches and nice multies. Keep it up J-Roc.

[shady_aftermathzz]

I know you think there's nothing wrong with it man, but more experienced voters don't just read em and vote for whoever they were feeling more, because that's not fair to the person who was technically better. The way you're saying it is that someone can be possibly crap at rhyming, but have some kick-ass funny jokes, and win the reader with some great humour. See, this is why there are categories, there are many elements to a rap verse, and all of them need to be addressed. I agree, this is a text battle, but only strengthens my case. This isn't a stage in front of a drunken audience, you can't get away with a few funny personal insults or punches. Because your lyrics are under a fine tooth comb, you gotta be better lyrically as well as coming with strong punches.

yes captain!! roger that and thanks
by the way bro, we stepped off on the RIGHT foot, thank god i dont have to murder you/ *laughs*

[shady_aftermathzz]

yea still 2-0, u need to have 50 posts

aigght, copy that

[J Roc]

I know you think there's nothing wrong with it man, but more experienced voters don't just read em and vote for whoever they were feeling more, because that's not fair to the person who was technically better. The way you're saying it is that someone can be possibly crap at rhyming, but have some kick-ass funny jokes, and win the reader with some great humour. See, this is why there are categories, there are many elements to a rap verse, and all of them need to be addressed. I agree, this is a text battle, but only strengthens my case. This isn't a stage in front of a drunken audience, you can't get away with a few funny personal insults or punches. Because your lyrics are under a fine tooth comb, you gotta be better lyrically as well as coming with strong punches.

by the way bro, we stepped off on the RIGHT foot, thank god i dont have to murder you/ *laughs*

lol,the only ones on this site that could kill 4d ina battle is c-game an me,and im not 100% on c-game or you mean actually killin him

thanks for tha compliments guys,i mostly got better cause of this site an some of the people on it.