new verse

[Phantom]

done to my loop of the biggie song 1970 somethin but this is just somethin i did cuz i wanted to rap

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInf ... ID=5463690

peep it and let me know

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

you should have let the beat run a little more or fade out, lmao, i thought the player had fucked up lol

anywae, sick flow and sick lyrics, nothing much more i can say

[Phantom]

thanks bar

actually theres like 3 minutes aftert it cuz i looped the beat for somethin i might do but i just ended it right there

but thanks for the feed

[B.A.D.]

Its good, the choice of the beat is completely not my style n the quality is fucked up

but your work on it made it great, nice track mayn

[Phantom]

ok cool thanks 4 feed

[DelinQuent]

i found it hard to hear what you were saying, and you kept the same tone of voice throughout the verse... EDIT- i listened again, and nevermind the tone of voice lol. it wasn't bad, but you just seemed kinda bored.

of the lyrics i did hear they were good. and overall decent job, keep working

[Phantom]

thanks 4 the feed